Toon Sea Serpent Monster!

[jabura86]

See it and comment! :)

 

 

This card can only be Summoned while "Toon World" is on your side of the field. When "Toon World" is destroyed, destroy this card. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent directly. Send "Toon World" on your side of the field to the Graveyard to destroy all cards on the field, and inflict Direct Damage to your opponent equal to the combined ATK of all Toon Monsters destroyed by this card's effect.

 

Image artist: Zang Whang

[thunderfang12]

Pic= Good

OCG= Good

Balance= Yes

Score= 7/10

[Steven Cope]

Pic is great, and perfect for a toon monster

Effect, is good

OCG, is excellent

I'll give 8/10

[jabura86]

thanks very much! :)

[Madsen]

You have a very nice start for a new member!

9/10

[jabura86]

thanks soldier! but this card isn't my start.. i made 60 cards before this... ihihi! :)

see my previous posts if you want!! :)

[Ivarboy]

Pic= Good

OCG= Good

Balance= Yes

Score= 7/10

 

agreed

[jabura86]

thanks

[Professor Cobra]

Take out the 2 reuired tributes, good pics and effects. 9/10

[Doctor]

pretty cool, balanced card

[jabura86]

thanks to all! :) i have to write that effect cobra.. if i don't write it, i could special summon it without tributes! :)

[pedin10]

thats really cool, but the pic isnt cartoon enough to be toon.

[Lazer Yoshi]

This could be real! :D

Good effect, excellent picture, good balance ^_^

9.0/10

[jabura86]

total different comments between pedin10 and steven cope..

thans yoshi! :)

[Bloodrun]

Artist Credit, please?

[jabura86]

i don't know who is..

[Bloodrun]

i don't know who is..

 

Alright, well from now on, whenever you make a card, please provide the name of the artist, or a link to where you found the image, alright?

Also, go here for further instructions:

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-67016.html

[jabura86]

ok sorry

[Bloodrun]

ok sorry

 

No need to be sorry, just trying to help.

[Wyhe]

you have done a great job for a newbie...I see potential from you...7.9/10

[jabura86]

thanks raviel.. i made 60 cards before this if you want to see more cards.. :) visits my precedent posts if you want.. i'm uploading them with image's links.. :)

[Tabris]

Overpowered; basically, if Konami finally picks up the pace on creating decent Class B Toons, I could easily imagine a handful of Class Bs swarming up the field, this bombing up everything, and my opponent roasting in torment.

 

Make the damage more like Time Wizard's, and you're set.

[jabura86]

you're the only one that says that this card isn't balanced.. if you knew levia.dragon - daedalus you would know what is this effect

[Tabris]

I know Daedalus' effect.

 

The problem with this card lies with the amount of damage my opponent will recieve from your Toon's effect. As I said, future card design on Class B Toons (those that could attack on the turn they are Summoned) would be able to take advantage of your Toon's effect to ruinous extremes.

 

Either put a cap on the damage or eliminate it altogether, thus making it more like the original Daedalus.

[jabura86]

bah.. as you prefer..

you don't remember that daedalus destroys all cards except itself

if i destroy toon world with my card, i destroy my monster too obbly

so i use another effect to balanced my toon monster respect the original, understand now?

however as you prefer..