PrimalFear Posted September 3, 2008 Report Share Posted September 3, 2008 hey guys i'm thinking about entering this card in a contest i need some suggestions comments rates anything to help this card become epic thanks This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Aqua-type" monster and 1 "Dragon-Type" monster from your field. Once per turn, you can negate the effect of a Spell or Trap that would destroy face-up monsters you control. If this card would be destroyed as a result of battle, Special Summon it to your opponent's side of the field during their next Battle Phase. I do not own this pic i got it from Deviantart and BanQ is the artist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Ruler v0id Posted September 3, 2008 Report Share Posted September 3, 2008 don't capitalize Except, should be WATER (it's an attribute) or Aqua-type (no spaces--same with Dragon-type) that said--interesting effect giving it to your opponent and all8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted September 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2008 thanks dark ruler ill fix it and the effect will help out in the new set im building Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
black99kid Posted September 3, 2008 Report Share Posted September 3, 2008 nice awsome card 9/10 great OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted September 4, 2008 Report Share Posted September 4, 2008 It's an interesting drawback for a card... There are many OCG errors, though, so 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SuperConductorTyranno Posted September 4, 2008 Report Share Posted September 4, 2008 I give this card a five:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted September 4, 2008 Report Share Posted September 4, 2008 7.5/10. awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bandito243 Posted September 4, 2008 Report Share Posted September 4, 2008 Great card 9.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid23 Posted September 4, 2008 Report Share Posted September 4, 2008 Hey im pretty new at this but that looks like a cool card so i give 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted September 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2008 thanks everyone plz tell me the OCG errors so i can immediatly fix them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xxion Posted September 4, 2008 Report Share Posted September 4, 2008 Level should be 8 but other than that, decent effect and ATK Overall: 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spitfire skateboards Posted September 4, 2008 Report Share Posted September 4, 2008 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted September 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2008 thanks guys ill think about LV 8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teramaster Posted September 4, 2008 Report Share Posted September 4, 2008 YOu should say: from your "side of" the field and Spell and Trap "cards". Btw I doubt anything would destroy this as a result of battle, so the last effect is pointless and makes the card weak if you ask me.Too bad it's vulnerable to Caius, Grand Mole and the D.D. family. On the other hand - what isn't? =P Cool card, really. The negating effect is really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted September 4, 2008 Report Share Posted September 4, 2008 You forgot to change "water-type" into "Aqua-Type" or "Sea Serpent-Type" and switch "Dragon-type" into "Dragon-Type". Other than that I see no other OCG mistakes. Good and balanced effect, fair enough ATK and DEF, and nice pic that I never seen in this site before. Okay, here is the fun part, the grade you recieve.You recieve a, A-. Good job. Oh, sorry if this would be considered spam, but if you want, I can holo it for you. You don't have to accept, just asking if you wanted it holoed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teramaster Posted September 4, 2008 Report Share Posted September 4, 2008 Oh yeah, I forgot. There's no Water-type. It's called Aqua-type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted September 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2008 thanks guys ill fix them and ill think about it with holoing, thanks everyonenew updates on the card its fixed anything else plz let me know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Digital.Simplicity. Posted September 4, 2008 Report Share Posted September 4, 2008 7/10 the card is not bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted September 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2008 thanks Mech King Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fiffer Posted September 4, 2008 Report Share Posted September 4, 2008 nice card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted September 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2008 thanks fifferhey guys i updated the pic to make it better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zane1988 Posted September 5, 2008 Report Share Posted September 5, 2008 nice better pic 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted September 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2008 thanks Zane Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spitfire skateboards Posted September 6, 2008 Report Share Posted September 6, 2008 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted September 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2008 thanks spitfire skateboards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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