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You must credit the artist. Find the name of the artist' date=' and post it here, along with a link to the picture. Also, if there is no artist, then just post the link to the picutre here.

 

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Yankeefan

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Actually, right now it is just provide the name of the artist. Unless, it is not from DeviantArt, in that case, provide the link.

 

Next time, Bandito, remember it ok? I'll let you go this time.

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Sorry, do you play Duel Monsters at all? Have you ever seen a lvl DIVINE Monster? How about a lvl that destroys 3 cards on the field with its summon? Orrr a monster with no creator credit (copyright 2008 to... whom?)

 

Remember that just because you're making your own cards, it doesn't mean you can go creating fantasy worlds where there are amazingly cool cards (at least cool to you) that do everything and look awesome. Realism is appreciated in the Realistic Cards Forum.

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Sorry' date=' do you play Duel Monsters at all? Have you ever seen a lvl DIVINE Monster? How about a lvl that destroys 3 cards on the field with its summon? Orrr a monster with no creator credit (copyright 2008 to... whom?)

 

[b']Remember that just because you're making your own cards, it doesn't mean you can go creating fantasy worlds where there are amazingly cool cards (at least cool to you) that do everything and look awesome.[/b] Realism is appreciated in the Realistic Cards Forum.

Actually, thats the point of what ycm is for...

But I agree, if your going to post it, please make it realistic on the Realistic Cards Forum.

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Hmm, well I think you need better image credit, sir.

 

Anyway..

 

-The pic there, is a very overused pic, i've seen it time, and time agian, sir. Which is why a better pic is needed or people won't really wont to look at as they wont want to see the same pic, yet again.

 

-Please change the Attribute form Divine into something suitable, like, FIRE.

 

-The effect overpoweres it, I mean it allows you to destroy 3 cards? For what cost? Add a sort of cost like, "tribute 2 FIRE Attribute monsters, on your side of the field" or something like that, to balance it, sir.

 

-You do have some OCG errors in that short effect, sir. For example:

 

opponent's

 

You missed the apostraphe there, sir.

 

So just take a look at the OCG Grammer Thread, dear sir. It should help you out with your OCG.

 

Overall, it does have many errors there, but i'm sure with some work, you could turn it into one good card there, sir.

 

Spire's Rating: (Once you edit it, I will increase the rating) 3.4/10.

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