StevenBray Posted September 5, 2008 Report Share Posted September 5, 2008 Rate, Comment and Criticize. Thank You! [img]http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/3341/4196vb5.jpg[/img] [b]Effect:[/b] Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you may add 1 Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. If you want to activate the selected card this turn, you must pay half your Life Points. When this card attacks you can discard Spellcaster-Type monsters from your hand whose Star Levels equal 7 or more. If you do, your opponent cannot activate Spell or Trap cards until after the Damage Step. Credit: http://azhrarn.deviantart.com/art/Azhrarn-1798752 by Azhrarn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 5, 2008 Report Share Posted September 5, 2008 Not bad, the picture is pretty good, the effect is also nice, and the OCG is fine. just one thing: you can take out "If you want" in the second sentence. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 5, 2008 Report Share Posted September 5, 2008 ^ What Bengal said. It's pretty good...8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steven Cope Posted September 5, 2008 Report Share Posted September 5, 2008 whose Level Stars not whose Star Levels.Though an amazing pic. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted September 5, 2008 Report Share Posted September 5, 2008 That rare jewel of a balanced card... + mouth agape + 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spitfire skateboards Posted September 5, 2008 Report Share Posted September 5, 2008 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted September 5, 2008 Report Share Posted September 5, 2008 That rare jewel of a balanced card... + mouth agape + 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Hunter™ Posted September 5, 2008 Report Share Posted September 5, 2008 There are a bit OCG Errors so heres the fix:Card:Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can add 1 Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. If you activate the selected card this turn, you must pay half your Life Points. When this card attacks you can discard Spellcaster-Type monsters from your hand whose Level is equal to 7 or more. If you do, your opponent cannot activate Spell or Trap cards until after the Damage Step."may" is outdated now its "can", It should say "if you activate this..." not "want", fixed the discarding part sentence, and i'm not sure about the last sentence. Hope These Help ^^^~Silent Hunter :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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