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Guardian + equip spell


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Created a guardian monster and its equip card:

 

TaeraDagger.pngTaera.png

 

never made this type of monster, so C&C is appreciated

 

[spoiler=art credits]

Emerald Dagger - Taera: http://www.edbeardjr.com/store/catalog/images/crystalswordmp.jpg (edited by me 8))

Guardian Taera: http://lh6.ggpht.com/backup.gratis/RxO--FH6rsI/AAAAAAAAByI/zDVHf5wd0b4/s400/p1929592.jpg

 

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Now, if I rate, will you actually NOT neg me for saying my opinion this time?

 

 

The first card is missing a commah between

"Card" and, "and"

 

 

The 2nd card:

Instead of

"When there is "....."..."

It's

"While there is...."

Also,

"This card is unaffected by the effects of Trap cards", instead of what you have down.

 

 

- Yankeefan emo-fish.gif

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thanks. and i neged you for merely saying my cards were bad without any feedback.

 

I think the guardian card's ocg is alright because i copied it from a real one and changed the spell card...

I did not know about you requesting me to post before.

 

Also' date=' I still think my above corrections are, well, correct. When it sounds like there should be a commah in a effect, usually, there is a commah in the effect, thats what I usually use, but that just looks like a commah is needed.

 

And as for the 2nd card, it's while, not when, i'm 100% sure about that. Thats how I have always known it, and how everybody does it.

 

- Yankeefan [img']http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee204/glasstin10/emo-fish.gif[/img]

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