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Rise Of The Necromancers


Luna Lovegood

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Arrow:

Not a terrible fan of the format you chose for these weapon names...

"loses half it's ATK" -> "ATK is decreased by half."

Other than that, it's a good equip.

 

Sword:

Graveyard, and the last part is a bit...off. It's possible to destroy an equip card without actually destroying the monster, in which case, the last part of the effect make no sense...I'd suggest either saying "when the equipped monster is destroyed..." or "When this card is destroyed, destroy the equipped monster...."

To clarify it.

 

Still pretty good. Give both cards an average 8.5/10

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here, for the first card:

This card cannot be placed face-down. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by paying 1500 Life Points. While this card is face-up on your field, it's is also treated as a Machine and Fiend-Type. For every Dragon, Machine and Fiend-Type monster, this card gains 100 DEF. If there is a card with 'Necromancer' in it's card name , you can Special Summon 1 LIGHT monster. You may Tribute LIGHT monsters to Special Summon DARK monsters. The ATK of this card is the combined ATK of the Tributed LIGHT monsters. When this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate Trap cards.

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