The Defending Pawn - Aethos

[Kale]

[align=center]Hello!

 

this is another contest card from me, and i was wanting some feed back. ;)

 

When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, activate 1 of the following effects based on the Attribute of the Monster that destroyed it: • Dark: Destroy 1 card on the field. If that card is sent to the Graveyard, it cannot be removed from play. • Light: send the top 3 cards of your opponent's Graveyard to the top of their deck, in any order. • Water: Destroy the Monster with the highest ATK on the field. • Fire: Destroy 1 face-up Spell or Trap Card on the field. • Wind: Special Summon 1 Level 2 or lower Monster in your Graveyard in face-up Attack Position. • Earth: Add 1 "The Defending Pawn - Aethos" in your Deck to your hand.

 

 

i might make these into a set if people respond well to them. ^_^ though i already have another idea for a set in mind..

 

i hope you like it.

 

Credit is given on the card, though here is the link: http://media.photobucket.com/image/android/LORDMETALMAN/android.jpg?o=19

 

no extra notes for this one, just Rate/Comment/Fix on it. :D

 

This card has been added to my [Archive].

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[bury the year]

Basic effect is too basic. Spice it up a bit.

[Kale]

Basic effect is too basic. Spice it up a bit.

 

spice it up a bit? it has 6 different effects....

[OMGAKITTY]

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I'm facing you in that contest, lol XD

Even though I've seen the pic before, it's still sweet.

[Kale]

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I'm facing you in that contest' date=' lol XD

Even though I've seen the pic before, it's still sweet.

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thanks. ;)

 

i appreciate it, even though you are in the contest as well. XD

[Bengal]

Another nice card, the pic cool, the OCG is good, and the effect I think is fine. The only thing I could possibly find is in the last line when you say "in" it should be "from". Don't worry about it though.

 

10/10

[sironthemage]

Cool. I think that you should take this idea and make it a set. Hey have you made yourself a Kuriboh Yet! Sorry if this is spammish.

[Kale]

Another nice card' date=' the pic cool, the OCG is good, and the effect I think is fine. The only thing I could possibly find is in the last line when you say "in" it should be "from". Don't worry about it though.

 

10/10

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yep, you are correct. ^_^

 

thank you for not letting that influence you rating though. :D

 

Cool. I think that you should take this idea and make it a set. Hey have you made yourself a Kuriboh Yet! Sorry if this is spammish.

 

a set? i will see... i was only writing that.. not to be taken seriously. XD

 

kuriboh? not yet... XD i should though.

[Kale]

~Bump 1/3~

 

I didnt get many comments yesterday, from different people at least. ^_^

 

I think the new bump rule is too strict though... Only three bumps? Ever?

 

Shouldn't it be... at least 5?

 

Anywho, I have used one for his thread.

[Phantasy Dreamz]

When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, activate 1 of the following effects based on the Attribute of the Monster that destroyed it: • Dark: Destroy 1 card on the field. While that card is in the Graveyard, it cannot be removed from play. • Light: Send the top 3 cards of your opponent's Graveyard to the top of their Deck in any order. • Water: Destroy the Monster with the highest ATK on the field. • Fire: Destroy 1 face-up Spell or Trap Card on the field. • Wind: Special Summon 1 Level 2 or lower Monster from your Graveyard in face-up Attack Position. • Earth: Add 1 "The Defending Pawn - Aethos" from your Deck to your hand.

 

fixed

fairly balanced

9/10

[Tabris]

On FIRE: Why not make it 1 Spell or Trap Card?

 

Despite the garden of flowery effects - it's balanced, and, as it turns out, Newdoria is better.

 

6/10

[Zaca]

Really like the effect

cool pic

balanced effect

10/10! good job

[Kale]

When this card is destroyed as a result of battle' date=' activate 1 of the following effects based on the Attribute of the Monster that destroyed it: • Dark: Destroy 1 card on the field. [b']While that card is in the[/b] Graveyard, it cannot be removed from play. • Light: Send the top 3 cards of your opponent's Graveyard to the top of their Deck in any order. • Water: Destroy the Monster with the highest ATK on the field. • Fire: Destroy 1 face-up Spell or Trap Card on the field. • Wind: Special Summon 1 Level 2 or lower Monster from your Graveyard in face-up Attack Position. • Earth: Add 1 "The Defending Pawn - Aethos" from your Deck to your hand.

 

fixed

fairly balanced

9/10

 

Cool, thank you. ^_^

 

On FIRE: Why not make it 1 Spell or Trap Card?

 

Despite the garden of flowery effects - it's balanced' date=' and, as it turns out, Newdoria is better.

 

6/10

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I respect that opinion. I said face up because it counters volcanics. This is a counter to the types based on attributes...

 

Really like the effect

cool pic

balanced effect

10/10! good job

 

Thanks!

[Καsτοr]

Hmm, though a large effect seems like a good way to make a monster balanced, it still isn't good enough. Its very balanced though!

I give thee. . .

8/10

[Steven Cope]

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I'm facing you in that contest' date=' lol XD

Even though I've seen the pic before, it's still sweet.

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thanks. ;)

 

i appreciate it, even though you are in the contest as well. XD

 

I knew I had seen this card somewhere before. The card that I knew I could never beat in the contest.

Thats why I give 9/10 because multiple effect cards like that are tricky and you got it down perfectly.

[Kale]

Hmm' date=' though a large effect seems like a good way to make a monster balanced, it still isn't good enough. Its very balanced though!

I give thee. . .

8/10

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Thanks. ^_^ I understand that.

 

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I'm facing you in that contest' date=' lol XD

Even though I've seen the pic before, it's still sweet.

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thanks. ;)

 

i appreciate it, even though you are in the contest as well. XD

 

I knew I had seen this card somewhere before. The card that I knew I could never beat in the contest.

Thats why I give 9/10 because multiple effect cards like that are tricky and you got it down perfectly.

 

Wow, thank you. ^_^

 

I believe this won first place, though I think I am confusing tournaments...

 

Thank you all for your comments!

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Pretty good. I think I've seen the pic before though. (IDK)

8.5/10

[Kale]

Pretty good. I think I've seen the pic before though. (IDK)

8.5/10

 

i dont know, you could have. i found it on photobucket...

 

anywho, thanks for the rate. ^_^