Legendary Phoenix, Bird of Rebirth + Phoenix Rush

[StevenBray]

Rate, Comment and Criticize. Thank You.

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[b]Card 1 Effect:[/b] When you draw this card from your Deck, you can play it in your Spell and Trap Card Zone as a Continuous Spell Card immediately. When this card is played as a Spell Card, decrease it's ATK to 0. While this card is in your Spell and Trap Card Zone, it cannot attack or defend. While this card is a Spell Card, during your Standby Phase, increase this card's ATK by 600. When your Life Points decrease to 0, you can remove this card from play to increase your Life Points equal to this card's ATK after Damage Calculation. This card cannot be returned to play if it was removed from play by it's own effect.

Credit:
Card 1 - http://bylouis.deviantart.com/art/Phoenix-75688239 by ByLouis with minor editing
Card 2 - http://www.jaestudio.com/from%20ashes.jpg by JAE with minor editing

[StevenBray]

***BUMP*** - how come no one commented? People are looking but not saying anything, what's up?

[Tabris]

Maybe check Toy Magician's text? Legendary Phoenix needs a lot of fixes, effect-wise, and it would be advisable for you to fix the wording first.

[StevenBray]

Maybe check Toy Magician's text? Legendary Phoenix needs a lot of fixes' date=' effect-wise, and it would be advisable for you to fix the wording first.

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1 - I thought I had come up with a new (not necessarily interesting) effect, and now I find out this type of effect already exists. Damn!!!

2 - You could be more specific about the problem, since you saying that and me checking a card whose effect does apply (somewhat) but not completely doesn't help.

3 - You could rate both the cards you know, and rate them as they are. Your posts and advice seem pitiful compared to some (not most) other members.