L33t Jenkins Posted September 6, 2008 Report Share Posted September 6, 2008 the original darkest times fan fic is not that good so ive decided to redo it with better stroies.ive also gave them names like the japanese episdoes chapter 1: Red eyes black dragon vs montaged dragonBen ran across the school corridor. he was late again. He always spent too much time sorting his cards than getting ready. The only reason he did this is because of 1 card that creeped him out. His red eyes black dragon which he got through winnig a tornamuent 3 yeards ago. The card seemed to making screeching noises in the middle of this night and it would cast a large shadow of itself on the wall. Ben was always puzzled by this mystery. He soon arrived to his classroom where the Headmaster was waiting for himBen: Sorry im late Mr. HawkettMr. Hawkett: This is the third this this week your are late and i cannnot tolerate it any more!Mr Hawkett saw the red eyes black dragon card in ben's handMr Hawkett: I see yuor a duelist. Ill give you a chance to get out of detention. all you have to do is beat me in a duelBen: whats the catchMr hawkett: If i win you get excluded for the rest of termBen: Okay ill duel youThe class was in shock. ben wasn't the best of duelists in the school and mr hawkett was a pro duelist who came 3rd in the national finals 5 years runnig.Well you and your class shall come to the school duel areana and watch you loose.Mr hawkett and Ben faced eachother only the duel square and placed there decks in the schools duel discs.Both: DUEL!Mr hawkett; 8000Ben: 8000Ben: Ill start by playing 1 card face down and end my turnMr hawkett: Let me guess you played Magic cylinder and i can destroy it using mystical space typhoon.Ben: ahhhmr Hawkett: Now i discard 3 level 4s from my hand to summon monatge dragon from my hand. (atk 3600)Ben: That is one powerfull dragonMr hawkett: and that is not all i summon luster dragon from my hand and they will both will attackBen: 2500Ben: aaahhhMr hawkett: I end my turn with 1 face downBen: Ill draw. {thinking: 1 more blow from his dragons and im going to be excluded}Ben then drew his drew his red eyes black dragon and smiled as he saw he aslo had his red eyes black chick and Megamorph in his handBen: i summon red eyes black chick and then tribbute him to special summon red eyes black dragonMr hawkett: That card is no match for my monstage dragonBen: Until i play Megamorph which will double its power making it have a grand total of 4800 now destroy his montage dragon.Mr hawkett: you are such a rookie ive got my face down card shrink will halve your draogn attackBen: noBen: 1300Mr hawkett: Let me guess its my turn and my dragon will now obliverate youMontage dragon rose its three heads and sent of a stream of fire straight at ben it was just about to hit ben then. Ben woke up from his bed and saw looked up at the calender today his exclusion had finished.-----END------- chapter 2: Rise of the Dark Heart HeroBen moved into his school this time he was early but he was very unpopulaur for losing the duel so quikly. He sat down in glass when he noticed his deck was glowing. His class gathered round as they saw each card in his deck had a print of his red eyes black dragon card on it and that his red eyes had a massive glow on it. He dropped all the cards to the floor and a black arua rosed which sooned formed into red eyes balck dragon and all his cards where sucked into the dragon.Ben: What the hell is going onRed Eyes: My Dark Master has summoned me for the begging of the darkest times.Ben resonised the word Dark Master but couldn't think of why it was like sonething was locked inside his memories.Ben: What do you the Darkest TimesRed Eyes: Well your about to find out. (Laughs)red eyes rose into the air and begang to transform into a much stronger form. Red Eyes Darkness Dragon.Red Eyes: Behold my true formBen: So all the roarings at night was you being trapped in the cardRed eyes: True and everyone you dueled at that tornament was a minion of mine and all where losing on pupposeBen: So im not a good duelistRed Eyes: Oh yes you are a good duelist well at least you wereBen: What doe that menaRed Eyes: Ive said too much i must continue with the planRed Eyes rose out of the school and into the sky and unleashed a wave of a shadowy aura which turned the sky a purpely colour.Ben: What is thisRed Eyes turned to Ben it opened it jaw and lets out a fire bolt at Ben.Ben suddenly woke up in a underground building.Doctor: Youve been in a coma for 3 months Ben.Ben: Why am I UndergroundDoctor: When the dragon appeared and cause the sky to change everyone was in terror and a gang of crooks that the dragon seems to work for called the hellfire kinghts have terrories all of the UK and we have to hide underground.Ben: TThe dragon he said that i was a good duelist onceVoice; and yes you wasBen: WHo are youVoice: im JiokA young man walked towards Ben carrying a Duel Disk and a DeckJiok: Ben what the Dragon said was true you are a good duelist.Ben: But i dont remeber anythingJiok: It was 3 Years ago in Japan when it mysteriously dissapeared you were doing the local tornamuent there and you managed to fight off the force doing it known as the Dark Master. With your friend Gale.Ben suddenly rembered everything the duel and GaleBen: I never saw the Dark Masters face and when he lost he laughed and vanishedJiok: Nevermind but we found this where you were lying and it was with a message saying, Ben even though ive left you i manged to get you your new deck which the gods have chosen for you. good luck you know who.Ben was given the deck and duel disc and put it on his arm.Ben: ThankyouJiok: Your welcome. We are starting a Duel Force to stop thing Gang do you want to join.Ben: Yes it kept the dragon in its card form.Jiok: Okay but you have to beat me in a duel to enter.Ben: Okay lets duelBen: 8000Jiok: 8000Jiok: I start and i play Gemini Elves in attack mode (ATK 1900) and i play my equip spell mage power and 2 face downs which increase my elves attack by 1500 (ATK 3400).Ben: my turn! I play the spell brain control which is a cost of 800 Life PointsBen: 7200Then i tribute you elves to summon Dark Hearthed Dragon (ATK 2200) which when Summoned i can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy all Spell and Trap Cards on the field.Ben: 6200Ben: Now attack with Black Flame.Jiok:5800Ben: Now its second effect activates. When it attacks directly it attack is increased by 300 points. (ATK 2500)Jiok: I see this deck has powerful cards but dont expect it to go this smoothly.Ben: Bring it on then.Jiok: Okay i play the field spell Mages Cirlce which increase spellcaster type monsters by 400 points and then i play Dark Curtian which by halving my Life Points allows me to summon Dark Magician (ATK 2500) and thanks to my circle it attack is increased (ATK 2900). Now Attack with Dark Magic attack.Ben: MY dragonBen:5800Jiok:2900Jiok: I end my turn by setting a monster whait you got another monster on the fieldBen: Yes its called Dark Spirit (ATK 0) i can special summon when a Dark Monster is destroyed in battle and now i draw.Ben picked up a card it was Dark heart Hero.Ben: First off a play Soilder Clone which allows to Special Summon a Level 1 monster from my Deck with the same name as 1 on the field so another Dark Spirit but thats not all i tribute both of the to Summon Dark Heart Hero (ATK 3000) and i still got 1 more card to use binding light seal which turns all Monsters on my opponents side of the field into Light Attribute.Jiok: What is the point in that?Ben: Because when my hero battles a light monster it attack increase now destroy Dark Magician.Jiok: 2300Ben: Now i play1 card face down and end my turnJiok: My turn now i play premature burila which allws my to bring my magician back and then i play thousand knives to say bybe to your HeroBen:But i play my face-down Dark Heart overdrive which makes my Hero immune to effect of splls and changes the target to one of your monsters Like your face down.Jiok: My Mystical Elf. Well i have just use rush reklessly to increae my Magians attack to 3600 and it to attack your HeroBen: nooo thats my beast cardJiok: Good say bye byeBen: 5700Jiok: Now the win is mine for the takingBen: I dont think so look at the field againDark Heart Hero returned back to the field and Jiok scratched his head in confusionJiok: But howBen: It is specai lSummoned after it is destroyed if it is destroyed by a light monster and my that spell of mine made your magicain a Light Monster.Jiok: Oh noBen: Let me gues its my turn and i summon dark Blade (ATK 1800)Now Dark Heart \hero destroy Dark Magician and then Dark Blade go in for the direct attack.Jiok: 0Ben: I won and it wasn't a false winJiok: Well done you are now a member of our Duel ForceBen: Thankyou mabye now we can stop that DragonMeanwhile in a wrecked cityVoice: Tell me why you want BenThug: I dont know are boss will not tell us why.Voice: Okay looks like i be after you bossThug: Okay ill best get going thenVoice: No you will not. You have upset my partner and his GodsThug: Gale what r u diongGale was wearing a gold chestplate which started to glow and a Image of Oblisk appeared and grabbed the thug and pulled him into the chest plate and soon after that the glowing stopped and the thug was gone.Gale; Ben me and my partner will find you.---------END----------- Chapter 3: Flying Duel. Rise of the StormGale was walking through the deserted streets when he came across the thug's dueling jet. Gale quikly jumped in and ued his PDA to hack into the flight system. It soon started up and he raced into the dark sky which was caused by red eyes. He was was half way to the duel force base when a chopper flew by him and in that chopper was another thug. Gale talk to him throught the radio in the jet.Gale: What do you wantThug: To stop you by defeating you in a duelGale: Okay bring it onThug: Okay activate flight duekl modeComputer: Flight Duel Mode activated. Duel disc revealing. Door dead lock. Life Bomb activated.Gale: What is going on.Thug: Well the winners doors will unlock but the looser engine will stop and they will go boom.Gale: Your insaneThug: Oh lokk who throwing the insults.Suddenly Gales chest plate started to glow and shortly after Gale looked slightly different his green shot hair was now spiky at the front his voice was deeper.Gale: Sorry Gale this is too dangerous for you.Thug: What the hell just happened?Gale: I am Gale's partner usally known as Yami Gale!Thug: Well ill get to make 2 people go boom. Lets duelYami Gale: 8000Thug: 8000Thug: I shall start by playing polymerization to summon Elemental Hero Rampard Blaster in defence mode (DEF 2500)Y Gale: So use still use Elemental Heroes heh.Thug: No this is just a deffence but i mgoing to tribute it for my Summoned Skull (ATK 2500) and i place 1 card face down a end my turn.Y Gale: So this deck has not got a theme like you firend my God took card of. I summon Hurricane Bird in attack mode (ATK 900) and whne this card is Normal Summoned i can return 1 card in the spell and trap card to the owners hand and i choose you face down.Thug: So what my Summoned Skull has alot higher attack.Y Gale: I know but i play the spell card Hurrcane Bird's gust which allows my do the same to yor montser sending it back to your hand.Thug: no that leaves my wide openY Gale: And thats not all i tribute my Bird to Special Summon Divine Huricane Bird (ATK 1900) and when hes summoned you i say a level and i you have a monster that level in your hand it is sent to the graveyard and i say level 6Thug: Ahh you planned this since i summoned my Skull.Y Gale: A now attack Divine Hurrica Bird with Divine Gust.Thug: 6100Y Gale: Ill end with a face downThug: Come out Goblin Attack force and i equip with soilders always stand which means it pisition cant be changed by it's own effect. Now destroy that annoying hrucane birdY Gale: Activate Drain ShieldThug: No. That draines my attack into your life points.Y Gale: 10300Y Gale: Let me guess you end your turnThug: YesY Gale: Such a rookie. i draw and yes i got the card. first off i summon faith bird in attack mode (ATK 1500) and then i play rise of the storm which by tibuting my Divine Hurricane Bird and 1 Level 4 Winged Beast type on my side of the field allows my to bring a Divine Hurricane Bird Overlord (ATK 3200) and when he is Special Summoned at the cost of 1000 Life Points I can destroy every card on the filed except itself.Y Gale:9300Y Gale: Now i equip it with Hurricane Sword which when my Overlord dose a direct attack its attack is increased by 800 points. now attack with Hurricane storm.The thugs chopper was blown by the massive wind created and swirled around for a bit before he catched up with Yami Gale.Thug:2100Thug: I play Mind Control Which allows me to take control of your monster which i will then equip with meagmorph and i will play monster reborn to brink back my skull and then destroy you. first off brain control.Y Gale: (Laughs) When My overlord changes control the new controler takes damage equal to its attack.Thug: Noo. Stop Brain control. No its to late.Brain control reach out for the overlord and brought it to the thugs side of the field.Overlord: So you which to control me but you must pay a small price./ Oh you dont have enough Life Points so it looks like its the end of the line.Thug: noooooThe overlord rose his amrs in the air and lets out a huge gust of wind that hit the thug's chopper.Yami Gale: Time to return to my realmthe chestplate began you glow and yami gale returned to gale. Gale watched as the thugs chopper stopped in mid air and exploded.Computer; Thug numer 273098 destroyed you won....Voice: GaleGale: Who are youVoice: I am Roaxanne leader of the Hell fire Knights i and hope to destroy you soon.Computer: Doors unlocked. Enjoy your journeyGale continued down to the Duel Force Base where ben was trainig in the sky areana.------THE END------ Chapter 4: Alex, The Burnig DuelsitIt was a a normal day in USA thry were totally unaffected by the effects of the dragon. A 15 year old boy was runnig down the streets being chased by a a hooded blke on a bike. This 15 year old boy was called alex and the guy chasing him was called toby. Alex was chased down an alleyway which led to a dead end Toby got off his bike and walked up to him.Toby: Give your cards nowAlex: No now let me go. You dont no what power i holdToby: Yuo are just a freak. I have got an idea we will have a duel if i win your cards are mine and if i lose. Which would never happen. i will let yu go.Alex: Okay ill duel youToby: Then Lets duelAlex: 8000Toby: 8000Toby: I start by playing Vorse Raider (atk 1900) try and beat thatAlex: My turn draw. i first off play molten Destruction which increases the attack of fire monsters by 500. then i plap dark room of nightmare and then summon solar flare dragon (ATK 2000) now attack.Toby: 7900Alex: and then i play 2 face downs and end my turn which when i do solar flare dragon does damage 500 damge to yuor life points and my to my dark room is out it is increase by 300 to make 800Toby: 7100Toby: Right my turn 1 play mnoster reborn to bring my vorse raider back then i tribute him to summon Ultimate Insecty level 5 (2300) now destroy that dragon.Alex: I play my 2 face downs which are both back fires which when 1 of my fire mnosters are destroyed you ose 500 life points and because there is 2 thats 1000 plus by dark room makes it a grand total of 1600 fin the rest l8ter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaca Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 this is cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted September 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 chapter 2 now posted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen Moon Posted September 8, 2008 Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 Cool Story so far cant wait until i gets into the major duels Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Welche Posted September 8, 2008 Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 i like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted September 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 i will post chapter 3 later today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaca Posted September 8, 2008 Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 Just read chapter 2 its awsome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted September 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 ty zaca. ive came up with the idea to allow fellow members to come up with there own characters with the fan fic which ill use in later chapters plus they can sbmit custom cards.if you want to do this then you have to post a comment with the foolwing thigCharacter name:Age:Bio:Deck name:Deck theme:Star Card: (can be custom) or if your posting just a custom card do thiscard imageeffect (if not readable)Who is the card for: (can be any character in the series as long as it fits with there deck theme) ps chapter 3 will be about gail in a flying duel. like a rding duel except it takes place in helicpters and planes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaca Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 chapter 3 is very good too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted September 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 12, 2008 i will psot chapter 4 later today and here is a first itme appearance of a main character that has not appeared in any of my fan fics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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