kirby99 Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 eheros rock Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 1st: eh, too underpowered. need to tweek it.until it's tweaked: 5.7/10 Here is my version: 2nd: OCG. Here is mine: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smeg Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 both terrible grammer/OCG and whys he called "hurricane' if hes a water attribute? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 both terrible grammer/OCG and whys he called "hurricane' if hes a water attribute?I agree about his OCG, and a hurricane is a water tornado, *listen 2 teacher!* because circulating winds go over the water, and that forms a hurricane. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 good 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaca Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 You need capitals in the name and theres OCG errors.But your a new member and no-ones perfect straight away. 9/10 for new mem 7/10 if you weren't a new mem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pro36ixty Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 ^I agree^ there are OCG errors but you will get better with practice. well dont through as your a new member Keep working on the OCG, i look forward to some more cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 a mod willl come to lock thisaccording to the new rule u have to credit the artist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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