My first 2 Sychros

[BulletMan]

for Heal Angels effect:

"1 Fairy-Type Tuner monster" + 1 or more Fairy-Type non-Tuner monsters

Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can pay 500 Lif Points to look at your opponents hand. Then choose 1 monster and Summon it to their side of the feild. If you do so, draw 1 card. You cannot Normal Summon this turn if you use this effect.

 

For Doom Cryer:

"1 Fiend-Type Tuner monster" + 1 or more Fiend-Type non-Tuner monsters

Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can pay 500 Life Points to return 1 card on the feild to its owners hand. Then you can look at your opponents hand, select 1 card and discard it to the Graveyard.

 

all credit for the pics goes to the artists. rate please.

[Smeg]

first would be banned it should be during your turn

second is way to good get rid of "if oyu do draw 1 card" at least

[masteriley]

Nice cards the rock

[mike maker]

those are cool cards

[electrum2008]

fab cards

[BulletMan]

edited, made it more balanced.

[Bloodrun]

Please read the Rules, then, when you have figured out why I have locked your thread, please PM me the answer and the link to your thread.

 

EDIT:

 

Issue resolved. Thank You for reading the Rules.

[BulletMan]

Thanks for unlocking the thread.

[king7586]

i like the pic for heal angel

[BulletMan]

Thanks king7586!

[king7586]

your welcome always glade to help

[Kale]

These cards are overpowered. -_-

 

Explanation:

 

On Doom Cryer:

For Doom Cryer:

"1 Fiend-Type Tuner monster" + 1 or more Fiend-Type non-Tuner monsters

Once per turn' date=' during your Main Phase, you can return 1 card on the feild to its owners hand. Then you can look at your opponents hand, select 1 card and discard it to the Graveyard. When this card attacks and destroys a monster by battle, you can send it to the top of the owners Deck.

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with this effect, you can just destroy the card you sent back to their hand, and then be able to see their hand. or, you can send the card back, and if it was face down then you are now able to see what it was, and then send something else. and then you had to add in the knight of jackal effect and make it even worse. so now you know their hand, and you give them a dead draw.

 

this card is extremely overpowered. 6/10

 

 

on Heal Angel:

"1 Fairy-Type Tuner monster" + 1 or more Fairy-Type non-Tuner monsters

Once per turn' date=' during your Main Phase, you can look at your opponents hand. Then choose 1 monster and Summon it to their side of the feild. If you do so, draw 1 card. You cannot Normal Summon this turn if you use this effect. When this card attacks a monster and destroys it by battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half of that monsters ATK.

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Now you can look at your opponent's hand. for free. that in itself is overpowered, as it defeats the element of surprise. then you can summon any monster to their side of the field, and draw a card. so you get a +1 for looking at their hand. basically the only downside is that they get a monster. it would have been fine until you added this last effect, which basically turned the only downside into a good side. when you attack a monster, you opponent takes half its ATK in damage.

 

this card is less overpowered than the first, but still overpowered. 7/10

 

combined total: 6.5/10

 

better luck next time. ^_^

[BulletMan]

made ATK lower for Kale says they are overpowered.

[Kale]

made ATK lower for Kale says they are overpowered.

 

*sigh*

 

apparently you dont read...

 

i will condense what i said two posts up.

 

the ATK doesnt matter. they could have an ATK of 0 for all i care. they would still be overpowered. and with the new ways of getting synchros quick, their effects would only be needed for one turn to see your opponent's hand.

 

that is what makes them overpowered, not their ATK. ATK is only used now for direct attacking, not combat. -_-

 

plus, you can protect them via threatening roar and such to keep their effects active, not even worrying about ATK...

[BulletMan]

how do you prupose i make them more balanced?

[Kale]

how do you prupose i make them more balanced?

 

um.. on the first one, take out the dead draw effect. it would be more decent if it had a cost too, life point payment or discard... something like that. make it not free.

 

on the second, make it have a cost as well, then i would take out the last effect with the extra damage.

 

after that, you can return them to their original ATK. ^_^ they would be very balanced if their effects came with a cost...

[BulletMan]

Fixed.

[Kale]

they are much better now. :D

 

now i would rate them a combined 7.8/10. ^_^

 

~K

[BulletMan]

hello?