RED ALERT 2 (SOVIET PACK) ver.2

[patarapop]

This is my second time that I post my card.let see my card:lol::lol::lol::lol::lol::o:o:o:o:o

Soviet pack

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Please give rate for my card.I will thank you very much

?/10

[KuroKibo]

OCG errors; can I give the considers?

[spoiler=Soviet's Correction]While this card is on the field, all Soviet monsters on the field gains 200 ATK.

 

[spoiler=Tesla Trooper's Correction]This card can attack all monsters on your opponent's side of the field each.

 

[spoiler=Conscript's Correction]Increase the ATK of this card by 200 points for each Soviet monster on the field. During each of your End Phase, Special Summon 1 "Soviet Force Token" (Soviet-Type/EARTH/Level 3/ATK 500/DEF 2000) in Defense Position on your side of the field.

 

[spoiler=Terror Drone's Correction]After this card attacks your opponent's Life Points directly, treat this card as a Continous Spell Cards; with this effect: Inflict 500 points to your opponent's Life Points during your opponent's turn's Phase this card's treated as a Continous Spell Card.

 

[spoiler=Team Work Force's Correction]When your opponent attacks your monster and you have 2 Soviet monsters on the field, you can choose one of them as an attack target. (also, you should change the Quick-Play icon to a Counter Trap icon.)

 

[spoiler=Ivan's Time Bomb's Correction]When the equipped monster attacks, destroy that monster.

 

[spoiler=Flak Tank's Correction]When this card is destroyed, Special Summon 2 'Conscript Token' (Soviet-Type/EARTH/Level 3/ATK 1500/DEF 1500) in Attack Position on your side of the field.

 

[spoiler=Flak Tank Rapid Weapon's Correction]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 'Flak Tank' and paying 500 Life Points. When this card is Special Summoned, destroy all cards on the field.

 

[spoiler=Apocalypse Tank's Correction]Increase the ATK of this card by 200 points for each Soviet monster cards in your Graveyard.

 

[spoiler=Yuri - Mind Lord's Correction]When this card is face-up on the field, select 1 monster your opponent controls. Take control of it until the End Phase of this turn.

 

[spoiler=V3 Rocket Launcher's Correction]This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. (If so, then reduce the Level to level 1 or 2, and reduce the ATK to 100-500.)

 

[spoiler=Cyborg Commando's Correction](Reduce the ATK, it's too big for a Level like that. Reduce it to, 2800 for example.)

 

[spoiler=Kirov Air Ship's Correction]When this card attacks, destroy all monster on the field (without damage calculation). {D'oh, you mean the only attacked monster?}

 

[spoiler=Desolator's Correction]When this card attacks a Warrior-Type monster, destroy the monster immediately with this card's effect (without damage calculation)

 

Sentences that are on a () brackets ( {} for Kirov Air Ship)(except Desolator) means the overpowered point.

Sorry if I got a slightly mistake OCG correction; if that's so, PM me. ^^

Some of it are also very overpowered.

Pics are really good, but some needs backgrounds.

So... your cards aren't really good, but keep improve it!

I rate 2.60/10

[DBZmaker]

sweet cards man

[patarapop]

thank you for your correction Robotic -.-

[KuroKibo]

thank you for your correction Robotic -.-

 

Thanks, just for help...

If anyone see my post and saw any wrongness, please tell me.