Gorben: Your Worst Nightmare

[Saima]

Yes, i know that the thread title was what brought you here. And you start asking yourself, "What IS this Gorben?" well, THIS is Gorben, Please rate.

I do not claim ownership of the pictures i use in my card(s), i only use them as a means to improve my cards.

[Bengal]

Not bad, the picture is OK, the effect is good, here is a little OCG help though:

 

If this card is switched to face-up Defence Position, destroy it. This card cannot be destroyed by battle (damage is doubled). In addition, you can pay half your Life Points to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card that specificly designates this card as a target and destroy it.

 

^that might not be right, but its an improvement^

 

7.5/10

[.:|Fallen|:.]

first wheres the pic credit

its not my worst nightmare

[Saima]

Thanks very much, i wasn't quite sure how to phrase the effect, and i appreciate the OCG help.

Edit: Re. Magno Under the card, if you look closely it says "I do not claim ownership of the pictures i use in my card(s), i only use them as a means to improve my cards. "

[mastergun6]

OCG errors, pic credit... and nice effect

8/10

[Tabris]

Not my worst nightmare. In fact, I won't use it.

 

2/10

[Professor Cobra]

Change level to 4, ATk to 1700, grammar problems, Spell or Trap Card. 7/10

[Doctor]

pic credit meaning credit of artist

not worst nightmare but good pic

ocg errors and post effect under card