monem Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 Card description :This card can't be Normal Summon or Set. This card can only be Special Summon by returning 2 monsters you control to your hand. you can pay 1000 Life Points to attack your opponent directly. This card is then destroyed. i find the picture here :http://www.hobbyjapan.co.jp/game/wp-content/mall-of-horror-cover-art.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jabura86 Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 good card! i don't like a lot the pic.. but no problem! :)8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monem Posted September 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 good card! i don't like a lot the pic.. but no problem! :)8/10Thanks :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Welche Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 It is overpowered, you set two traps, return them to your hand, and set them again. Or you set it the set negate attack, then on your next tur switch it into attack mode. Work on OCG, or as I know say RCG and I don't like the pic. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monem Posted September 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 It is overpowered' date=' you set two traps, return them to your hand, and set them again. Or you set it the set negate attack, then on your next tur switch it into attack mode. Work on OCG, or as I know say RCG and I don't like the pic. 4/10[/quote']Ok. i'd changed the picture and i fixed some OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 That is better preety good i give 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chidori Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 Overpowered should be level 7 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaca Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 You didn't do spaces after full stops.Theres still some OCG errorsOCG Fix:This card cannot Normal Summoned. This card can only Special Summoned by returning 2 monsters you control to your Hand. Pay 1000 Life Points to attack your opponent directly. This card is then destroyed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scampy Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 i have to agree with everything zaca said. also the picture shouldn't have a background like that, it should have one like not in a town kindu thing. sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 Not bad, although it is a bit overpowered, try lowing its attack by a couple hundred. The pic could be better too. Also, in the first sentence you need to add "or Set" after "Normal Summoned". 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monem Posted September 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 Thanx all . This is the fixed card :what about it now ??:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 better, still need to capatilize Normal Summon and Special Summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 Nice Try! OCG Errors. I don't like the pic =/8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monem Posted September 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 better' date=' still need to capatilize Normal Summon and Special Summon.[/quote']Done :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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