Doctor Who series

[Sten Darker]

I'm sure at least one other person here has done DW. In fact, I'd like to see them! compare, contrast, etc. I like my system. More will be added, by editing this next post.

 

hello! I'm The Darker! I'm new to this forum, so... this is just my introduction! I've recently won a Wii, through that, I entered the world of The Legeand of Zelda: Ocarina of Time, and am now stuck in Lord Jabu-Jabu's belly (any tips?). Looking for answeres, I checked Zeldaedia (useless) and through the Wikia Spotlight, I discovered the Yugioh Card Maker Wiki! After a quick google search, I discovered this site! :)

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Edited since Wooper Slim. So will many of these.

 

Here's the regeneration system. All the following Doctors can be summoned, instead of the 2 sacrifices, with the one of removing from play the previous incarnation.

 

Before I continue, I should explain the TARDIS system.

This card equips to a Time Lord type monster. When done, you can, at any time, choose to shuffle that timelord back into your deck along with the TARDIS, which automatically shuffles itself back inyour deck no matter what. If you have exactly 6 (you'll need some other card for this, making it hard to do ;) )you can do this with all of your monsters.

 

Here is the Doctors exile on Earth, since he is not Time Lord type (even though, he is still a Time Lord) he cannot use the TARDIS. He is also more physical then the other Doctors, so I didn't give him a unique effect.

 

Since I didn't know what to do with him, I gave the 4th Doc a unique concept in this freeky card game. His points are almost unalterable. Unless the Card specifies him, or The Doctor type, he can't be effected.

 

I'm quite proud with this one, I like the system. Also, I traded off the Swords thing, because this Doctor was notibally more human, and open with his fears and hopes. But still a good card game-wise.:D

 

5 Doc's down, five to go! :)

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You might be thinking, 'hay, that cards 3 sacrifices!? But its not worth 3!!' Well, my reasoning comes from the show, not the game. This Doctor was known to be violent, self absorbed, and well.. mentally unstable. If you have the previous Doctor, that makes it one sacrifice anyway.

 

I have never seen an episode, or even a clip from this Doctors episodes, so I did my best through Tardis.wikia.com. This card gives you a little bonus. When you draws three cards, it makes room for any cards you can't fit in your hand. please note, that the extra room in your hand is only for those cards.

 

more completed, and ready to post!

[kodak]

im a doc fan and time lotd is not a sub tittle

[Sten Darker]

im a doc fan and time lotd is not a sub tittle

 

Time Lotd? you mean Time Lord? as in its not a monster type? I know that, typically, I'm against adding new types, but this is the only way I could get it to work. It keeps things much more orgonized. So far, there's Time Lord, The Doctor, and Dalek types, i've added. I will try my best to limit that! However, this was unavoidable.

 

However, thanks for the input.

[WooperSlim]

The 1st Doctor: You're right. It's not worth the one sacrifice. In fact, I wouldn't put it in my deck. Either give it less stars, an effect, or more power. Or all three.

 

(all the cards): I wouldn't give it two fake types. "The Doctor" is already part of the card name, so it is redundant. You need to give credit for the Doctor Who pictures. Removing the cards from play is all right, but I think it would be better if the next Doctor was Special Summoned when the previous was destroyed, since that would fit better. And why is it that "Swords of Revealing Light" can't affect The Doctor? Same with some of the other effects, I don't understand what they have to do with The Doctor. But I'll help you with what you have, anyway. :)

 

The 2nd Doctor: All the traps I can think of that last longer than 3 moves are continuous traps. (and monsters don't 'trigger' trap cards...) You could just say "When this card is targeted by the effect of a Continuous Trap Card, negate the effect and destroy it during your opponent's third End Phase"

 

Time and Relative Dimensions in Space: There is a lot of unnecessary wording. This would be better: "When this card is equipped to a monster, you can add the equipped monster to your Deck. The Deck is then shuffled. When this card is removed from the field, it is added to the owners Deck. The Deck is then shuffled."

Also, please write out the entire effect on your post when the words are that small. And you can only have 5 monsters on the field at a time.

 

The Third Doctor: He was only unable to use his TARDIS at the beginning of this regeneration. But if you still want that, I think it would be better if it just had it as part of its effect: "This card cannot be equipped with 'Time and Relative Dimensions In Space"

 

The Fourth Doctor: Your wording is confusing. Better would be "The ATK and DEF of this card cannot be altered except by a card that specifically targets this card, or by a card that affects Time Lord-Type monsters."

 

The Fifth Doctor: More card grammar errors. There is a sticky on using correct card grammar that you should really read if you are going to make more cards. I'm only helping you this much because I really like Doctor Who. :)

It would be better to say for the last effect, "During battle with another of your monsters, you can send this card to the Graveyard to reduce the Battle Damage to 0"

 

The Sixth Doctor: 9 stars is too many for an effect monster. For any monster, really. Even if they do exist, as far as I know, there is no rule about having to Tribute 3 monsters. If you want that, it would better if it was part of the effect. Personally, I think the rest of his effect is enough to reflect his "crazy" nature.

 

The Seventh Doctor: Be specific when you say "temporarily" If you only mean until your next end phase, "extra room" is not required-- that is normally when you must reduce your hand size to 6 or less. If you mean for the next couple turns, you should say so. If the second is what you want say "Until your ___ End Phase, the limit of your hand at your End Phase becomes 9 cards."

 

And you really should see some of the 7th Doctor. He's good. :)

[Freeman The Master]

so is the tenth Doctor as well you can see him on BBC and Sci-fi

[Sten Darker]

so is the tenth Doctor as well you can see him on BBC and Sci-fi

I know' date=' I've got the 10th Doctor done. Also, you're part of UCIP!?? :D!!!!!!! I'm Sten Darker there too. I'm the ATAC on The Archer! How's the war on your end?

 

EDIT: Sorry, didn't read that properly. I was talking about the United confederation of [i']interstellar[/i] Planets. A Star Trek SIM. [/i]

 

The 1st Doctor: You're right. It's not worth the one sacrifice. In fact' date=' I wouldn't put it in my deck. Either give it less stars, an effect, or more power. Or all three.

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Yeah, all right, I'll give it 4 stars. Its better that way. (by the way, this is GOOD FEEDBACK! Thanks! :D)

(all the cards): I wouldn't give it two fake types. "The Doctor" is already part of the card name, so it is redundant. You need to give credit for the Doctor Who pictures. Removing the cards from play is all right, but I think it would be better if the next Doctor was Special Summoned when the previous was destroyed, since that would fit better. And why is it that "Swords of Revealing Light" can't affect The Doctor? Same with some of the other effects, I don't understand what they have to do with The Doctor. But I'll help you with what you have, anyway. :)

Yeah, see, The Doctor class is more for cards I PLAN to make really. Ones meant to effect The Doctor only. And I know for a fact that there are canon cards that have both "the" and "doctor" in their names. don't ask me their full names, I know I've seen them, that's all that matters.

Now Swords of Revealing Light. 3 reasons, one, because the Doctor has kept secrets his entire life. It gives him that mystery. 2. The Doctor is so resoursefull, shiny switchknives aren't going to stop him. It's just alittle bit of "The Doctor can do anything!" kinda fanpraise. 3. because I can give exception to the 2 most emotionally open Doctors ever, 1st and 5th. It gives them uniqueness among the Doctors.

 

All the pictures are stait off Tardis.wikia.com, the pictures: public access. (otherwise, it'd be illegal for THEM to have the pictures)

 

Removing from play, the purpose of that is to make it difficult to overwelm the opponent with Several Doctors. It makes the regeneration seem more... permenent. Also, another card I plan to make, the 5 Doctors will be impossible if the cards are in the graveyard, where they are pretty much expossed.

The 2nd Doctor: All the traps I can think of that last longer than 3 moves are continuous traps. (and monsters don't 'trigger' trap cards...) You could just say "When this card is targeted by the effect of a Continuous Trap Card, negate the effect and destroy it during your opponent's third End Phase"

I will do that. Thank you!

Time and Relative Dimensions in Space: There is a lot of unnecessary wording. This would be better: "When this card is equipped to a monster, you can add the equipped monster to your Deck. The Deck is then shuffled. When this card is removed from the field, it is added to the owners Deck. The Deck is then shuffled."

Sure thing!

Also, please write out the entire effect on your post when the words are that small. And you can only have 5 monsters on the field at a time.

no problamo!

The Third Doctor: He was only unable to use his TARDIS at the beginning of this regeneration. But if you still want that, I think it would be better if it just had it as part of its effect: "This card cannot be equipped with 'Time and Relative Dimensions In Space"

Yeah, maybe... ok. I know it was only for the first season, but I wanted that first season to be reflected.

The Fourth Doctor: Your wording is confusing. Better would be "The ATK and DEF of this card cannot be altered except by a card that specifically targets this card, or by a card that affects Time Lord-Type monsters."

that is almost exactly what I said! I'm sorry, but I'm not a grammer nut, if that is confusing if it isn't exactly like it supposed to be by the grammer book, then you'll never be able to read anything I say! lol! but I'll change it.

The Fifth Doctor: More card grammar errors. There is a sticky on using correct card grammar that you should really read if you are going to make more cards. I'm only helping you this much because I really like Doctor Who. :)

It would be better to say for the last effect, "During battle with another of your monsters, you can send this card to the Graveyard to reduce the Battle Damage to 0"

alright, I'll check it out. And I'll fix up that card to!

 

The Sixth Doctor: 9 stars is too many for an effect monster. For any monster, really. Even if they do exist, as far as I know, there is no rule about having to Tribute 3 monsters. If you want that, it would better if it was part of the effect. Personally, I think the rest of his effect is enough to reflect his "crazy" nature.

I agree! I didn't like that anyways!

 

The Seventh Doctor: Be specific when you say "temporarily" If you only mean until your next end phase, "extra room" is not required-- that is normally when you must reduce your hand size to 6 or less. If you mean for the next couple turns, you should say so. If the second is what you want say "Until your ___ End Phase, the limit of your hand at your End Phase becomes 9 cards."

 

And you really should see some of the 7th Doctor. He's good. :)

 

Actually, what I meant way, as long as those cards are in your hand, sace will be alotted for those cards only! you know, I'll phrase it like that!

 

And, sure I'll check out the 7th Doctor! If I ever can! The ONLY time we get the Classic series here (American Midwest, Centeral Time Zone) if on IPTV (Iowa Public TV) at 1-2 AM on SUNDAYS!!!!!! So you can see why its difficult! Most of the Classic episodes I've seen were on Youtube and thats TERRIBLE for watching Doctor Who! I saw Impossible Planet, then the next two episodes from Trial of a Timelord were no where to be found!!! a week later, Impossible planet was removed! :'( Waaaa!!!!

 

sigh* if you have episodes on hand, please upload it to youtube! It may get you banned... but I would really appreciate it!! lol!

[The Tin Trooper]

Lol... following in my footstaps! Nice cards!

[WooperSlim]

by the way' date=' this is GOOD FEEDBACK! Thanks! :D

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You're welcome :D

Yeah, see, The Doctor class is more for cards I PLAN to make really. Ones meant to effect The Doctor only. And I know for a fact that there are canon cards that have both "the" and "doctor" in their names. don't ask me their full names, I know I've seen them, that's all that matters.

Yeah, I thought that was what you were thinking, and that's fine by me. I still think its redundant. Have you thought on those cards saying, for example, "This card can only be Equipped to a Time Lord-Type monster with "Doctor" in its card name..." ? That's my only other suggestion if you want to get rid of "The Doctor" sub-type.

Now Swords of Revealing Light. 3 reasons, one, because the Doctor has kept secrets his entire life. It gives him that mystery. 2. The Doctor is so resourceful, shiny switchknives aren't going to stop him. It's just a little bit of "The Doctor can do anything!" kinda fan praise. 3. because I can give exception to the 2 most emotionally open Doctors ever, 1st and 5th. It gives them uniqueness among the Doctors.

Okay, I can see why you picked that now. Still a little strange, in my opinion. :) I never really saw the 1st Doctor as being emotionally open, but I guess he is a lot compared to most the others.

Removing from play, the purpose of that is to make it difficult to overwhelm the opponent with Several Doctors. It makes the regeneration seem more... permanent. Also, another card I plan to make, the 5 Doctors will be impossible if the cards are in the graveyard, where they are pretty much exposed.

Ah, okay. When I first started playing Yu-Gi-Oh! My first deck was a remove-from-play deck. So I naturally don't have the normal view that cards removed from play are un-accessible. :)

that is almost exactly what I said! I'm sorry, but I'm not a grammer nut, if that is confusing if it isn't exactly like it supposed to be by the grammer book, then you'll never be able to read anything I say! lol! but I'll change it.

lol. Yeah, I only understood it from your explanation under the card. :)

The Seventh Doctor: Be specific when you say "temporarily" If you only mean until your next end phase, "extra room" is not required-- that is normally when you must reduce your hand size to 6 or less. If you mean for the next couple turns, you should say so. If the second is what you want say "Until your ___ End Phase, the limit of your hand at your End Phase becomes 9 cards."

Actually, what I meant was, as long as those cards are in your hand, space will be allotted for those cards only! you know, I'll phrase it like that!

I'm not quite sure what you mean. So, say, I am playing and my 7th Doctor gets destroyed by battle. I have 6 cards in my hand. I draw 3 cards. Let's say the new cards are "Romana," "Leela," and "Adric." So, now I have 9 cards. My turn comes around, I draw another card, but I decide I can't really play anything, so I end my turn. So what happens?

It sounds like if space is being allotted "for those cards only" then as long as I never play Romana, Leela, or Adric, I can have 6 (normal) + 3 (extra) = 9? So I would have to discard 1? If that is what you are saying, then you'll probably have to add in that you must show the drawn cards to your opponent. Otherwise he/she would never know when or if you play them. Also, since that is an unusual effect, I'm not sure what the best way to word it and still sound official...

And, sure I'll check out the 7th Doctor! If I ever can! The ONLY time we get the Classic series here (American Midwest, Centeral Time Zone) if on IPTV (Iowa Public TV) at 1-2 AM on SUNDAYS!!!!!! So you can see why its difficult! Most of the Classic episodes I've seen were on Youtube and thats TERRIBLE for watching Doctor Who! I saw Impossible Planet, then the next two episodes from Trial of a Timelord were no where to be found!!! a week later, Impossible planet was removed! :'( Waaaa!!!!

 

sigh* if you have episodes on hand, please upload it to youtube! It may get you banned... but I would really appreciate it!! lol!

I was lucky. My Aunt really liked Doctor Who when it was on, so she recorded every episode when they were on our PBS station. My sister recently got done converting each VHS tape to DVD format. If you can, what I would do is just set the recorder to come on when Doctor Who comes on, and see it later. I have the episodes, but I'm not going to put them on Youtube, because I probably would get banned. :)

 

I'm glad you appreciated my critique. There's still some errors on the ones you have changed, but the are MUCH better. Mostly capitalization. (Spell, Trap, Special Summoned, etc.) I found that thread on grammar, by the way: Official Card Grammar Thread if you haven't read it yet. Good luck with everything!