yugiohcardmaster5696 Posted September 8, 2008 Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 This card can only be Equipted to a Worrior-type monster. If a Worrior-type Monster is attacked by a Dragon-type monster flip a coin, if heads inflect 2000 damage to your opponent. This is my first card and dont be mean ok just comment what should be changed and retype the effect for good grammer for me thanks .) byebye ------------disclamer-------------------------------------------------i do not claim or own this artwork i found it by serching for it so dont tell me i didnt tell me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Insectivore Posted September 8, 2008 Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 Really bad OCG, may have been a decent effect, if i had bothered to try and understand it. 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted September 8, 2008 Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 Horrible. By limiting the potential interaction to a Type, it fails most disappointingly. 0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohcardmaster5696 Posted September 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 FIRST THIS IS MY FIRST FIRST!!!!!! CARD EVER AND I WAS ASKING IF ANYONE CAN HELP ME I NEVER SAID RATE ME SO GET OFF OF ME DOING HORABLEY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chiengu Ruu Posted September 8, 2008 Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 Well, it a lot better than other new comer and their 9999ATK card. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Insectivore Posted September 8, 2008 Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 FIRST THIS IS MY FIRST FIRST!!!!!! CARD EVER AND I WAS ASKING IF ANYONE CAN HELP ME I NEVER SAID RATE ME SO GET OFF OF ME DOING HORABLEY Alright, alright calm down. OK for starters it's not "worrior" its "Warrior"... alright look, study some real cards until you get it right, i can't be bothered to help you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted September 8, 2008 Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 Overpowered... and what grade are you in? It's "Warrior" and "Equipped". Goodness, get a dictionary or something. ^^Anyway, if you want help, I'd be glad to help you. Here's what you need to fix (balancewise): The fact that you can only use this card in a Warrior-Dragon encounter makes it very limited. However, if you did face a Dragon-Type Deck, and you were playing with a "Six Samurai" deck or something, then this card would give you an incredible advantage (though the possibility is very unlikely).Remember that, even if there aren't any cards in your Graveyard, you can still remove them from play. That's technicality, you need to deal with it. I like your first bullet though, about the ATK increase. ^^ How about you have it only equipped to a Warrior-Type or [insert other type here]-Type Monster, and use the effect against any monster, as long as the equipped monster is in Attack Position, and its ATK is lower than the opposing monster, and your LP is lower than your opponent's. Following me so far? ^^ Then make one bullet the ATK increase bullet (and keep that 3-card discard from the top of your deck... that's a good one) you've already got, and make another one, say, by removing from play 5 cards in your graveyard you can add the equipped monster to your hand, but send the equip card to the Graveyard. So I kinda rewrote the effect for you... try and phrase it your own way and I'll help correct OCG. :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Insectivore Posted September 8, 2008 Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 Overpowered... and what grade are you in? It's "Warrior" and "Equipped". Goodness' date=' get a dictionary or something. ^^Anyway, if you want help, I'd be glad to help you. Here's what you need to fix (balancewise): The fact that you can only use this card in a Warrior-Dragon encounter makes it very limited. However, if you did face a Dragon-Type Deck, and you were playing with a "Six Samurai" deck or something, then this card would give you an incredible advantage (though the possibility is very unlikely).Remember that, even if there aren't any cards in your Graveyard, you can still remove them from play. That's technicality, you need to deal with it. I like your first bullet though, about the ATK increase. ^^ How about you have it only equipped to a Warrior-Type or [insert other type here']-Type Monster, and use the effect against any monster, as long as the equipped monster is in Attack Position, and its ATK is lower than the opposing monster, and your LP is lower than your opponent's. Following me so far? ^^ Then make one bullet the ATK increase bullet (and keep that 3-card discard from the top of your deck... that's a good one) you've already got, and make another one, say, by removing from play 5 cards in your graveyard you can add the equipped monster to your hand, but send the equip card to the Graveyard. So I kinda rewrote the effect for you... try and phrase it your own way and I'll help correct OCG. :mrgreen: Thank you for sparing me that job N00B Hunter... but why the hell did you call yourself N00B Hunter if you offer help like that - to a very Noobish member? BTW i agree with your fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
power lord 3000 Posted September 8, 2008 Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 [/img]listen this is kind of creepy the pic isn't awesome and you have some spelling mistakes sorry you need more work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crosspath Posted September 8, 2008 Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 Overpowered... and what grade are you in? It's "Warrior" and "Equipped". Goodness' date=' get a dictionary or something. ^^Anyway, if you want help, I'd be glad to help you. Here's what you need to fix (balancewise): The fact that you can only use this card in a Warrior-Dragon encounter makes it very limited. However, if you did face a Dragon-Type Deck, and you were playing with a "Six Samurai" deck or something, then this card would give you an incredible advantage (though the possibility is very unlikely).Remember that, even if there aren't any cards in your Graveyard, you can still remove them from play. That's technicality, you need to deal with it. I like your first bullet though, about the ATK increase. ^^ How about you have it only equipped to a Warrior-Type or [insert other type here']-Type Monster, and use the effect against any monster, as long as the equipped monster is in Attack Position, and its ATK is lower than the opposing monster, and your LP is lower than your opponent's. Following me so far? ^^ Then make one bullet the ATK increase bullet (and keep that 3-card discard from the top of your deck... that's a good one) you've already got, and make another one, say, by removing from play 5 cards in your graveyard you can add the equipped monster to your hand, but send the equip card to the Graveyard. So I kinda rewrote the effect for you... try and phrase it your own way and I'll help correct OCG. :mrgreen: Thank you for sparing me that job N00B Hunter... but why the hell did you call yourself N00B Hunter if you offer help like that - to a very Noobish member? BTW i agree with your fix.um... lol... it is over powering and... NOOb is right... sort of- Spelling right is like the main idea in REALISTIC CARD SECTION Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohcardmaster5696 Posted September 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiod9979 Posted September 8, 2008 Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 HUmm Intresting Image is from a game called Monster Hunter try to find Anime pics, all in all bad spelling mistakes and a few ocg errors and the 2000 Needs to be lowered maybe 1000 or 500 I'm not the one to say all depends on the rareness. All you need to do is sort them out and a higher rate will be yours so far 4/10 (due to being your first Card) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spitfire skateboards Posted September 8, 2008 Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted September 8, 2008 Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 Please read the Rules, then, when you have figured out why I have locked your thread, please PM me the answer and the link to your thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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