TwinSnakes Posted September 8, 2008 Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 1st Trap Card I made...just give me some feedback and let me kno wat u think...please comment and rate!!! Image credit goes to: Bernd Nies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Digital.Simplicity. Posted September 8, 2008 Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 Nice card is nice pic is good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinSnakes Posted September 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 8, 2008 Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 Does the 500 LP payment happen each turn, or is it just upon activation?Decent card. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinSnakes Posted September 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 Just on activation so i was thinking of changing the activation cost to 600 or 700 Life Points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vang911 Posted September 8, 2008 Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 nice card, yea change the LP payment to something higher.. i like it, your OCG might be off but idk (looks good), 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lNightmare Posted September 8, 2008 Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 i think that 200 life points per monster attack is really low Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinSnakes Posted September 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 thanks you think that now the card is a little better balance wise? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted September 8, 2008 Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 I like it, solid picture and I have never seen that effect before. And the name really suits the effect. Normally, it would be a 7.5/10 but you are a new member so 8.299999999/10. Good JOB! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinSnakes Posted September 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 thanks man and thanks for the rating Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HellKaiserofDarkness Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 meh....ok 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinSnakes Posted September 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 thanks for being honest...personally this is my favorite card i've made so far Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 Pic is not so good (too much black area and there's writing at the botton of it), effect is alright but requires clarification on certain things *such as when the Life Points are paid), although if I am understanding it it's balanced. OCG is good, not errors there really except you don't need to say "opponent's Life Points" anymore, you can just say "opponent" now. Card Rating: 6/10 - Pic is a real problem, but the card itself is not too bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 Gravekeeper's Servant > Toll > this. Meager pinshot at your opponent's LP does lower it 0... in about 25 turns. If that isn't Stormed, MST'd, Twistered, Decreed, Jinzo'd... ... no, thanks. 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinSnakes Posted September 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 thanks i tried 2 get it so the words wouldn't show and i made the card a little more clarifying so hopefully that helps some but thanks for the commentya let's see gravekeeper's servant says "ur opponent discards a card evrytime a monster attacks" and toll says "both you and your opponet pay 500 life points each time a monster attacks" i didn't even use anything about that 2 create this card i made it specifically for a deck structured around the DARK attribute type. and your opponent gets inflicted 300 for evry non DARK monster he/she attacks with Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thunderfang12 Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 ok OCG good pic 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinSnakes Posted September 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 thanks for the rating and nice card u got there yourself Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delta Guardian Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 Decent card 8/10 ok pic good use of OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 Non-DARK monster, good pic and effect. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xemba Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 Underpowered Burn is Yuck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinSnakes Posted September 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 thanks professor cobra i'll be sure 2 check out some of ur posts and comment on them as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delta Guardian Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 wow congrats this card seems 2 be pretty decent and i acutally just built a deck that i could use this card in if it was real so im gonna up my rating to 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
king7586 Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 not bad i like the effect 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinSnakes Posted September 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 thanks man the comments are appriciated :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skull Dragon Posted September 12, 2008 Report Share Posted September 12, 2008 hehe yay ur 1st trap card is awesome Twin the effect would go well in any deck with a lot of DARK Attribute cards congrats. 10/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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