1st Card Ever

[Delta Guardian]

let me all know wat you think. please rate and comment. ^_^

 

 

Image Credit goes to: Mark Darger

[Luna Lovegood]

Not bad. For a newb. 7/10

[jabura86]

good card! useful for harpie deck :)

8/10

only 1 thing.. if the effect is to destroy all non-wind monster of opponent, you can change the first part to simply "only while there is a wind monster(s) on your side of the field", no?

but this is only my opinion.. nice card however! :)

[Von Csent]

Correct OCG:

"This card can only be activated if there is a face-up WIND monster in play. Discard 2 WIND monsters from your hand to return all non-WIND monsters your opponent controls to his or her [hand]." (I assume you meant to send them to the hand.)

 

The card is okay, but I wouldn't expect it to see much play, considering Guardian Sphinx.

[spitfire skateboards]

for a good one for new 8/10

[Delta Guardian]

no i meant they get destroyed. and thanks OCG errors fixed.

[Professor Cobra]

Change to Quick-Play Spell, good pic and effect. 8/10

[TwinSnakes]

I must say this is a pretty good card and an interesting effect but ya i don't know if u should keep it as a continous might be a little powerful then... but

 

Pic: 9/10

Effect: 9.5/10

OCG: 9/10

 

Overall Rating: 9.3/10

[OMGAKITTY]

I don't like it as a continuous. Otherwise it's pretty decent.

7/10.

[Zombiefire78]

It should be either a Normal Spell or a Quick-Play Spell. It's good other than that.

[Delta Guardian]

thanks ya i can change it 2 a quick play spell card if thats wat evryone thinks it should be

[Catman25]

very realistic but a continuous? Otherwise A- 7/10, I've been giving so many 7's today!

[Delta Guardian]

kk thanks for the comment and rating i'll change it to a quick play spell car when i get back home 2night

[~Rebellious Rage~]

7/10 nice pic and it is a decent card.

[Dark]

I love the pic, sweet effect without any OCG errors and... 8/10 but 8.5 for a new player! You are going to be an awesome card maker with these cards.

[Delta Guardian]

thanks darkdragonx and i also changed it to a Quick Play Spell card like many of you suggested so let me know wat u think now

[jamief]

Good for a newb :P

 

7/10

[teramaster]

Good OCG. Only mistake is that there's the word "Attribute". You just say WIND, the word Attribute is not necessary. Being a quick-play card also kinda makes it ok to throw away 2 cards. But still, those cards have to be Wind monsters both, that's kinda hard to accomplish, don't you think? 8/10 from me.

[Delta Guardian]

ya i admit it is kinda hard 2 accomplish but if you have a deck that mainly has WIND monsters in it then it would be a little easier plus the effect would be worth it...kinda like Rageki i guess except a little more balanced

[3person of stuff3]

Creative limitations and good pic:) 8.7

[mastergun6]

Pretty good for ur 1st card

8/10

[Monkey]

pretty good

[StevenBray]

not a bad card, OCG errors that I saw are addressed by above members, so I won't waste time repeating them. Effect seems ok, but risky - it's edging very close to OP. Pic is not too great, but illustrates the point well.

 

Card Rating: 7/10 - very close to OP, so be careful.

[Delta Guardian]

thanks i will and i believe all the OCG errors are now corrected...anyone think my card is good enough 2 enter the contest?

[omgakey]

100000000/10 nice job