Battle The Monsters

[Saima]

Hey everyone!

Ive recently started a new booster, Battle The Monsters.(BTM) And i will upload new cards as i make them!

(P.S Please tell me if this is in the wrong section, i wasn't sure.)

(P.P.S Please don't say that they suck, without giving me a reason why they do, i really do want to improve my cards, so please tell me why you don't like them.)

I do not claim ownership for the pictures used in any of my cards. I only use them to enhance my work.

[Zombiefire78]

I like Gorben and Anubis ^_^

For Gorben, lose the third effect.

For Anubis, it's pretty good. It should have 2300-2400 ATK at most though.

[Saima]

Thanks, i think that Gorben is one of my best too, Thanks for being positive!

[OMGAKITTY]

You need to remember to capitalize certain words (Summon, Graveyard, Life Points, ect)

See the OCG thread for a full listing.

OCG is so-so...some pics are overused...

 

and I noticed on "White Magician" that you mis-used the word 'effected' (card is affected by an effect) -_______-

The word you are looking for is 'affected'

learn2grammar.

[Saima]

Ah, i didn't notice those, thanks for the help!

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