NadrojV Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 so im sorta new at this so let me know what you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 These cards are overpowered and unrealistic. Decrease the attack and def of the cards to a realistic level and also tone down their levels, 12 starts isn't very realistic. The pictures are good though, but you should read through the OCG/Grammar thread to figure out where you need to capatilize and how things should be phrased. for example: lifepoints = Life Points standby phase = Standby Phase graveyard = Graveyard 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jabura86 Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 uhm.. the eff are not bad.. but the monsters are ovepowered.. a eff monster with 3000 or more atk needs a special summon.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Digital.Simplicity. Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 There your first cards so don't expect much keep trying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 Okay first, lower their ATK and level. Then you can add another effect onto Dragon Overlord. There are minor ocg errors (all capitalization) here are fixed versions of those words: Standby Phase, Graveyard, Life Points Good pics and interesting effect on the first 1. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 You really shouldn't be exceeding 3500 for either ATK or DEF...Check OCG Thread plz.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NadrojV Posted September 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 here are the updates guys what do you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jabura86 Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 ok! much better.. good!council for the overlord dragon: need 3 monsters, instead of 2 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NadrojV Posted September 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 ok so 3 instead of 2 thanks for the input and ive got a new one what do you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 Please read the Rules, then, when you have figured out why I have locked your thread, please PM me the answer and the link to your thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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