>>Some New Cards, I Might Make A Whole Set<<

[laconus]

[b][color=#FF0000][center]My Newest Card That I Have Made. Rate And Comment However You Want, But If You See An OCG Error, Or If You Think The Card Is Over/Under-Powered Please State Why! (I Don't Claim Ownership For Any Of The Artwork Used On My Cards, Unless Stated Otherwise)[/center][/b][/color]

[align=center]
[color=#32CD32]
This is a couple cards for my new set of "Dream Beast" monsters, they can't be summoned to monster card zones unless that zone has a "Dream Warp Counter" on it, and if the counter is removed the "Dream Beast" is destroyed. Generally "Dream Beast" monjster gain effects for the number of counters on their monster card zone.

-------------------------------------

Briar Chicky

[IMG]http://i33.tinypic.com/2jfhrut.jpg[/IMG]
Pic Link & Artist: http://jengslizer.deviantart.com/art/Bird-Cage-34372462 - Jengslizer (Deviant Art)

When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can, place 1 "Dream Warp Counter" on an unnoccupied Monster Card Zone.

-------------------------------------

Dream Beast Arris

[IMG]http://i35.tinypic.com/mwvcea.jpg[/IMG]
Pic Link & Artist: http://jengslizer.deviantart.com/art/Norrasingh-15254112 - Jengslizer (Deviant Art)

This card may not be Summoned into a Monster Card Zone that does not have at least 1 "Dream Warp Counter" on it. When this card is Summoned you may place 1 "Dream Warp Counter" on a Monster Card Zone. In addition to a normal attack, this card can attack during the same Battle Phase as many times as the number of "Dream Warp Counters" on the Monster Card Zone that this card occupies. When a Monster Card Zone that this card occupies has no "Dream Warp Counter(s)" on it, destroy this card.

-------------------------------------
Dream Beast Battle Pegasus

[IMG]http://i35.tinypic.com/wcmz49.jpg[/IMG]
Pic Link & Artist: http://jengslizer.deviantart.com/art/Pegasus-Fantasy-14243599 - Jengslizer (Deviant Art)

This card may not be Summoned into a Monster Card Zone that does not have at least 4 "Dream Warp Counter" on it. During your Main Phase you can select 1 "Dream Beast" monster on your side of the field. If your opponent controls an unoccupied Monster Card Zone with 4 or more "Dream Warp Counters" on it, the selected monster may attack your opponent directly. When a Monster Card Zone that this card occupies has no "Dream Warp Counter(s)" on it, destroy this card.

-------------------------------------
Dream Beast Garu

[IMG]http://i34.tinypic.com/28vcciv.jpg[/IMG]
Pic Link & Artist: http://jengslizer.deviantart.com/art/Little-Garuda-14160742 - Jengslizer (Deviant Art)

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card may not be Special Summoned into a Monster Card Zone that does not have at least 2 "Dream Warp Counters" on it. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 1 "Briar Chicky" on your side of the field. When this card attacks return 1 Spell/Trap card on the field to its owners hand. When a Monster Card Zone that this card occupies has no "Dream Warp Counter(s)" on it, destroy this card.
[/color][/align]

[.:|Fallen|:.]

weres pic creidit

[laconus]

[align=center]Posted Them, Thanks For Reminding Me :)

But What Do You Think Of The Actual Cards[/align]

[.:|Fallen|:.]

i think there good

carry on making more

[Pink]

Cool Cards, I Definitely Think You Should Continue The Set

[Madsen]

Your a genius for a noob!

9/10!

[Lord Ursus]

I like this idea. Keep these coming. + rep

 

By the way, can you give my a link to the image of the card in your sig?

 

P.

[laconus]

[align=center]Thank You For The Comments

I Added A New Card "Dream Incubator"[/align]

[spitfire skateboards]

i like them 9.9/10

[N00B Hunter]

It's only First Edition if it has a Gold Sticker. Either change the sticker or remove the circulation. Your pictures are good, though, and your titles are nice as well. Aesthecity: C-

 

"Briar Chicky" and "Arris" work well together. I like the idea of "Dream Beast" Monsters. Your Spell Card, however, is too strong for a developing set, and you should put it aside until your "Dream Beast" set is in full bloom, then release it along with your early "Nightmare Beast" Monsters. Balance: B

 

Your OCG is modern and communicates to meaning of your cards well. Some mistakes are that it's "in" a monster card zone, instead of "on", and you capitalized "Summoned" in a certain area, but didn't in another. Take a pick, and choose the lowercased one (unless you're listing kinds of summonings, the "s" need not be capitalized). OCG: B

Average Grade: C+

 

The set is a good idea, and I like it a lot. If you want help with anything, from OCG to balance to aesthecity work, just send a private message to me and I'll get back to you as soon as I can. :mrgreen:

[Zaca]

Very good cards. There way better than what i could do when I was new! 9.5/10

[Atomix]

The 1st is like a Neo-Spacian Cocoon.

[Drantoric]

cool cards 9/10

[Stormex]

Picture(s): 4/5

OCG:5/5

Effect(s): 5/7

Name(s): 2/3

total: 16/20

---

I like the cards continue to make more and mabey change the background.

[laconus]

[align=center]Thank You For The Comments I Have Decided To Continue The Set!

I Added A New Card "Dream Beast Battle Pegasus".

And "Dream Incubator" Shall Be Removed Until Teh Release Of The Second Dream Beast Set[/align]

[personman]

Right now their not that great, but with a continued series they could be awesome! How do Dream counters get removed, anyway?

 

Basically, if this were to be any good, you'd need more cards that brought out dream warp counters, and more dram beasts, especially at very least one more that has an effect that requires you to have dream warp counters on your opponents field, like Pegasus

[Καsτοr]

Hmm. . . Intterestingly awesome!

 

Great Idea:

8/10

[laconus]

I Added A New Card "Dream Beast Garu".

[Καsτοr]

Cool Birdie!

He looks awesome with an awesome effect. Good Job!