Survivor Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 Hey Guys! I just want to give thanks to a user on photobucket named drakaan. Here is my best card yet. I think it's my best work. Here it is. Also, it's spelled Sabetooth for a reason. I didn't forget the "R". Here is the Card Lore: This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up. This card can attack all monsters or your opponent's side of the field once each. This monster cannot attack your opponent directly if it attacks any monsters first. Please Rate! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 OCG is good, except 'side of the...' is no longer required (but isn't wrong to include). Pic is a little blurry (maybe it's just my comp), and effect is balanced and good, although it's first effect is reminisant of Spirit Monsters. Card Rating: 8/10 - Spirit Monster discrepancy not affecting rating. P.S. Is this card meant to be a Spirit Monster? Just curious Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 ew....some nasty ocg here...lets see... "This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn it was Summoned. This card can attack all monsters once. This card cannot inflict direct damage if it has already battled another monster."^Something like that. ...It's not bad. Make it 7 star...otherwise it's probably OP.Eh. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Survivor Posted September 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 Oh. I'll change it. How though? How am I supposed to change it to a spirit rather than an Effect? Also, the pic was CG, so it's supposed to look like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 OMGAKITTY: "Inflict direct damage" is old ocg. That part of the card text is fine right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Survivor Posted September 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 Okay. I kind of learned OCG the OLD Way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 New ocg is what you have right now. (For that part of the text) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 Oh. I'll change it. How though? How am I supposed to change it to a spirit rather than an Effect? Also' date=' the pic was CG, so it's supposed to look like that.[/quote'] 1 - I'm not a huge fan of CGI on cards (but some can be used), since they (in my opinion) don't work very well, but fair enough it's not a problem. 2 - Either you type "Beast / Spirit" into the Type box on the card maker (while making it an Effect Monster), and then edit it using Paint Shop Pro (not Paint) or Photo Shop etc to cover the "Effect" part on the card with a copy of a piece of the effect box. Or ask one of the shops to do it; I'm not sure which shops do it, but I know at least 2 or 3 do so. ew....some nasty ocg here...lets see... "This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn it was Summoned. This card can attack all monsters once. This card cannot inflict direct damage if it has already battled another monster."^Something like that. ...It's not bad. Make it 7 star...otherwise it's probably OP.Eh. 7/10 I honestly prefer his OCG to your's (no offence), which is rare actually since I usually agree with pretty much everything you say about a card's OCG (maybe disagree with small bits, but never the whole thing before). Plus yea I miscounted the number of stars, you shoudl really make it a 7 Star Monster or it's OP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Survivor Posted September 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 Okay. I'll make the necessary changes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 None taken.Eh. Win some, lose some. lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Survivor Posted September 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 I made the changes. Now it is a 7 start and is a Spirit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 Asura, just harder to Summon. CC/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Ixigo Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 Lol, put spaces before and after the / in the Type. Also, the beast is pronounced Sabertooth. And do you even know what Ultimatum means, or just decided to use a random cool-sounding word? Because it's really out of context there, unless you have something in mind, in which case, elaborate. The effect is clever though. A little underpowered, what with all the sacrificing it needs, the fact that an opponent rarely has enough monsters on the field that will fall to this card's strength except in specialized decks, add that it can't be Special Summoned and it is a Spirit and well... needs a little buffing in my view. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Survivor Posted September 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 I do have something in mind. Also, it's meant to be Sabetooth, not Sabertooth. I don't want to make it stronger anyway. It's how I want it to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 Yeah, you mentioned it's Sabetooth intentionally, but it bothers me too....How do you even pronounce that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Survivor Posted September 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 Sabe-tooth. I wanted it to sound cool and not just be SabeRtooth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 Sabe-tooth sounds lame though... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Survivor Posted September 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 I know. Just discard it...But thanks for the positive rates! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted September 12, 2008 Report Share Posted September 12, 2008 pic is too realistic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 12, 2008 Report Share Posted September 12, 2008 ' pid='1106029' dateline='1221252244']pic is too realistic. Except that it isn't a realistic pic at all? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Survivor Posted September 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2008 Just saying, does anyone know what a Sabertooth actually look like? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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