pokemon mystery dugeon time and darkness (chapter 1 posted!)

[starly]

[spoiler=chapter 1]

One day there was a piplup standing on a bech trying to wake up a turtwig.

piplup:Hey wake up come on wake up already.

Then turtwig woke up.

turtwig:huh were am I.

piplup:you are on beach cave.

turtwig:huh YOUR A TALKING POKEMON!

piplup:your a talking pokemon to.

turtwig:no i'm not i'm a human.

piplup:a human but you look like a normal turtwig in every way.

turtwig:WHAT IT'S IT'S REALLY TRUE I AM A TURTWIG!

piplup:whats your name?

turtwig:my name that's right my name is.............................................turtwig that's right turtwig is the name.

...:help me!!!

piplup:huh i here shouting from over there.

zubat:i faked that voice.

zubat bashed piplup to get the treasure.

piplup:hey give that back.

zubat:no Way!

koffing:We will race you to the top floor of beach cave.

So koffing and zubat ran into beach cave.

piplup: hey come back here...whaaaaaaaaaaa.

turtwig:what was that treasure box for anyway.

piplup:it was filled up with hms and tms, hey i have got an idea shall we make a rescue team and call it thunderous.

turtwig:okay

piplup:then we are off to beach cave.

1f beach cave.

they walked in beach cave looking in for a stair case and they found 3.

4f beach cave.

zubat:hahaha chimchar your really weak.

chimchar:hey no im not weak!

koffing:yes you are weak.

piplup:im back to save chimchar and to get me my treasure box back.

 

To Be Continued

coming soon to your fanfic fourm chapter 2

 

[Καsτοr]

Ok, this is pretty bad.

I. . . Could. . . Not. . . Follow. . . Pokemon, And I never will.

And, again. Bad.

This is the plot from the actual story too.

[Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP]

Bad very bad. Try getting a original plot

[Crystal Beast 123]

Not to be mean or anything, but it's not very good.

Keep trying, though!

[starly]

ergh okay