Brushfire Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 So I've recently been getting into Sci-Fi, and I had a sudden spur of an idea. It's on the very basis of the idea, and is yet to expand, but I have this Plot. (It's from the POV of an "Ailien". I mean the Plot is, the actually novel won't be.) Plot: Human beings, apparently have advanced evolution powers. We do not understand how advanced these creatures are, but we know that they do have a limited mind. We say this, however they are close to finding our existence. So far, they have exceeded in populating themselves on almost all the planets in the Milky Way. The way they treat the Milky Way disgusts us, however we will stay in our own galaxy for now. In chronlogical order, they've populated Mars, Venus, Jupiter and Saturn! How they managed to create land form on Jupiter and Saturn we will never understand; perhaps these "humans" aren't as limited as we thought. However, we'll see how long this race lasts before they end up killing themselves off. Your thoughts? -Pyro Knight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 meh...... unique but boring idea... will sell well =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted September 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 meh...... unique but boring idea... will sell well =D Someone doesn't like Sci-Fi. :PIf you're not interested in Sci-Fi then it will seem boring to you.Will sell well? o.O Wth is that supposed to mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Rebellious Rage~ Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 If you put that in a news paper I bet alot of people would beleive it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted September 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 If you put that in a news paper I bet alot of people would beleive it. XDLets all laugh at the guillable humans!Wait, I'm a human? Damn!Does it really seem that believeable? o.O"I mean, I know we're trying to vegitate Mars but... o.O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Rebellious Rage~ Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 If you put that in a news paper I bet alot of people would beleive it. XDLets all laugh at the guillable humans!Wait' date=' I'm a human? Damn!Does it really seem that believeable? o.O"I mean, I know we're trying to vegitate Mars but... o.O[/quote'] Yes it does, the way he/she wrote it is one reason why and there are more that I'm to lazy to list. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted September 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 If you put that in a news paper I bet alot of people would beleive it. XDLets all laugh at the guillable humans!Wait' date=' I'm a human? Damn!Does it really seem that believeable? o.O"I mean, I know we're trying to vegitate Mars but... o.O[/quote'] Yes it does, the way he/she wrote it is one reason why and there are more that I'm to lazy to list. Yes! I'm genderless!Wait, you meant the Alien?DANG.And you're too lazy to list them? =pPl0x do. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Rebellious Rage~ Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 Well yah. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 if you write a novel, people will read it... not movie suitable though =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted September 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 if you write a novel' date=' people will read it... not movie suitable though =P[/quote'] I actually agree with you. This book would be too "boring" for modern day soiciety to watch in film.However, I feel that it would be an interesting read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 Mars, Venus, Jupiter and Saturn are suddenly most of the Milky Way? ._.With that aside, it needs more development in the story ideas; Something to catch my attention so I bother to book it out of the local library. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted September 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 Mars' date=' Venus, Jupiter and Saturn are suddenly most of the Milky Way? ._.With that aside, it needs more development in the story ideas; Something to catch my attention so I bother to book it out of the local library.[/quote'] Yes, with only Mercury, Uranus, Neptune and Pluto (do I even count that thing that's smaller then a moon as a planet?) left, Mars, Venus, Jupiter, Saturn and Earth are most of the Milky Way.It does need a lot more devolopment; I've said this is only the minor basis. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 Mars' date=' Venus, Jupiter and Saturn are suddenly most of the Milky Way? ._.With that aside, it needs more development in the story ideas; Something to catch my attention so I bother to book it out of the local library.[/quote'] Yes, with only Mercury, Uranus, Neptune and Pluto (do I even count that thing that's smaller then a moon as a planet?) left, Mars, Venus, Jupiter, Saturn and Earth are most of the Milky Way.It does need a lot more devolopment; I've said this is only the minor basis.Go learn sciencez>_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted September 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 Mars' date=' Venus, Jupiter and Saturn are suddenly most of the Milky Way? ._.With that aside, it needs more development in the story ideas; Something to catch my attention so I bother to book it out of the local library.[/quote'] Yes, with only Mercury, Uranus, Neptune and Pluto (do I even count that thing that's smaller then a moon as a planet?) left, Mars, Venus, Jupiter, Saturn and Earth are most of the Milky Way.It does need a lot more devolopment; I've said this is only the minor basis.Go learn sciencez>_> I reccomend YOU do.I'll spell this out very slowly for you... MercuryVenusEarthMarsJupiterSaturnUranusNeptunePluto [Dwarf Planet] Humans have 5 of 9 planets in the Milky Way. Pluto is a dwarf planet that is extremely small, of which is smaller then some moons.5 is a higher number then 4, meaning the humans have the majority of the planets in the Milky Way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 I heard they don't call Pluto a planet no more. But still seem as an okay idea, but still needs a little more idea. Still, looks pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted September 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 I heard they don't call Pluto a planet no more. But still seem as an okay idea' date=' but still needs a little more idea. Still, looks pretty good.[/quote'] It's classified as a Dwarf planet, but regardless it's still a main planet in the Milky Way.And, thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 I heard they don't call Pluto a planet no more. But still seem as an okay idea' date=' but still needs a little more idea. Still, looks pretty good.[/quote'] It's classified as a Dwarf planet, but regardless it's still a main planet in the Milky Way.And, thanks. Oh, must have misheard it. No problem. I'm also working on a book right now too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 Mars' date=' Venus, Jupiter and Saturn are suddenly most of the Milky Way? ._.With that aside, it needs more development in the story ideas; Something to catch my attention so I bother to book it out of the local library.[/quote'] Yes, with only Mercury, Uranus, Neptune and Pluto (do I even count that thing that's smaller then a moon as a planet?) left, Mars, Venus, Jupiter, Saturn and Earth are most of the Milky Way.It does need a lot more devolopment; I've said this is only the minor basis.Go learn sciencez>_> I reccomend YOU do.I'll spell this out very slowly for you... MercuryVenusEarthMarsJupiterSaturnUranusNeptunePluto [Dwarf Planet] Humans have 5 of 9 planets in the Milky Way. Pluto is a dwarf planet that is extremely small, of which is smaller then some moons.5 is a higher number then 4, meaning the humans have the majority of the planets in the Milky Way.Hold on, lemme fix that: MercuryVenusEarthMarsCeres [Dwarf Planet]JupiterSaturnUranusNeptunePluto [Dwarf Planet]Eris [Dwarf Planet] I've already proved you wrong. I could go further by c/p'ing various other planets in the Milky Way, but there'd be little point. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted September 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 Mars' date=' Venus, Jupiter and Saturn are suddenly most of the Milky Way? ._.With that aside, it needs more development in the story ideas; Something to catch my attention so I bother to book it out of the local library.[/quote'] Yes, with only Mercury, Uranus, Neptune and Pluto (do I even count that thing that's smaller then a moon as a planet?) left, Mars, Venus, Jupiter, Saturn and Earth are most of the Milky Way.It does need a lot more devolopment; I've said this is only the minor basis.Go learn sciencez>_> I reccomend YOU do.I'll spell this out very slowly for you... MercuryVenusEarthMarsJupiterSaturnUranusNeptunePluto [Dwarf Planet] Humans have 5 of 9 planets in the Milky Way. Pluto is a dwarf planet that is extremely small, of which is smaller then some moons.5 is a higher number then 4, meaning the humans have the majority of the planets in the Milky Way.Hold on, lemme fix that: MercuryVenusEarthMarsCeres [Dwarf Planet]JupiterSaturnUranusNeptunePluto [Dwarf Planet]Eris [Dwarf Planet] I've already proved you wrong. I could go further by c/p'ing various other planets in the Milky Way, but there'd be little point. I suppose I'd better explain.Firstly, don't c/p, that already proves you didn't prove me wrong, but instead wherever you c/p it from.Anyway, I'm discluding the Dwarf Planets, and yes that includes Ceres and Eris, considering I feel that they are too small to be considered planets. They'll be in it, but not as main planets in the novel. Don't try to prove me wrong, because I know what I'm talking about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 Mars' date=' Venus, Jupiter and Saturn are suddenly most of the Milky Way? ._.With that aside, it needs more development in the story ideas; Something to catch my attention so I bother to book it out of the local library.[/quote'] Yes, with only Mercury, Uranus, Neptune and Pluto (do I even count that thing that's smaller then a moon as a planet?) left, Mars, Venus, Jupiter, Saturn and Earth are most of the Milky Way.It does need a lot more devolopment; I've said this is only the minor basis.Go learn sciencez>_> I reccomend YOU do.I'll spell this out very slowly for you... MercuryVenusEarthMarsJupiterSaturnUranusNeptunePluto [Dwarf Planet] Humans have 5 of 9 planets in the Milky Way. Pluto is a dwarf planet that is extremely small, of which is smaller then some moons.5 is a higher number then 4, meaning the humans have the majority of the planets in the Milky Way.Hold on, lemme fix that: MercuryVenusEarthMarsCeres [Dwarf Planet]JupiterSaturnUranusNeptunePluto [Dwarf Planet]Eris [Dwarf Planet] I've already proved you wrong. I could go further by c/p'ing various other planets in the Milky Way, but there'd be little point. I suppose I'd better explain.Firstly, don't c/p, that already proves you didn't prove me wrong, but instead wherever you c/p it from.Anyway, I'm discluding the Dwarf Planets, and yes that includes Ceres and Eris, considering I feel that they are too small to be considered planets. They'll be in it, but not as main planets in the novel. Don't try to prove me wrong, because I know what I'm talking about. If you knew what you were talking about, you would know what a "galaxy" is. Even little second graders know that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 Pyro, our solar system isn't the only one in the Milky Way to start with... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted September 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 Pyro' date=' our solar system isn't the only one in the Milky Way to start with...[/quote'] *Hides*I knew that, I was just testing you :PI fail at Science, I'm maining going to focus on the fiction and action though.I'll have to change that, I only mean our solar system. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 Pyro' date=' our solar system isn't the only one in the Milky Way to start with...[/quote'] *Hides*I knew that, I was just testing you :PI fail at Science, I'm maining going to focus on the fiction and action though.I'll have to change that, I only mean our solar system. ya right, anyway do that... don't count dwarf planets... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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