Yu-Gi-Oh! GX: The Hero's Destiny

[Dark Duelist2]

Yu-Gi-Oh! GX – The Hero’s Destiny

 

“Now Speed Warrior, finish him off!”, the boy grinned as the silver warrior leapt across the field, ready to deliver the finishing blow.

 

“No offense kid, but you have made a grave mistake. You see, your Speed Warrior only has 900 attack points, and that’s not nearly enough to take me out just yet.", replied the boy’s opponent. The boy was wearing a Ra Yellow uniform and his opponent was wearing an Obelisk Blue uniform. It had finally come down to this last attack. He remember how he had been nervous about his exam earlier in the day, but now that he was actually experiencing it, it wasn’t that bad. In fact, he had enjoyed the duel.

 

“Whenever you find yourself in a tough spot, think about all of the challenges you’ve managed to overcome and you’ll be able to deal with the problem.”. He remembered when his uncle had told him that many years ago. They had that conversation on the day that his uncle passed away from some sort of mysterious energy source. It wasn’t known exactly how he had died, but people had discovered this new source of energy, and since his uncle was a scientist, he had went to check it out. He never came home.

 

Alex wondered what his uncle had done when he was caught in that tough spot. Why wasn’t he able to survive? Well, that wasn’t important right now. What mattered was winning the duel and making his uncle proud.

 

“Sure Speed Warrior only has 900 attack, but once I activate his Special Ability, you’ll realize that you’re finished! Check this out! During the turn my Speed Warrior is put into play, I can double its original ATK until the End Phase!”

 

As Alex stared into his opponent’s eyes, expecting a look of desperation to form on his opponent’s face. However, what he got wasn’t a look of fear, it was a grin. A grin of arrogance, yet a grin that wasn’t able to be ignored. Alex got the feeling that his opponent wasn’t going to be out just yet.

 

Alex’s eyes scanned the field. His opponent had a face-down card. That was it. No monsters, and no cards in his hand. Just as Alex’s silver warrior prepared to strike, his opponent extended his arm and his face-down card flipped up.

 

“If you think I’m going to lose to a Ra Yellow, you’re wrong! I play Glorious Illusion! With this Trap, I can bring back one of my Lightsworn monsters!”

 

What Lightsworn monsters were in his opponent’s Graveyard anyway? From what he could recall, there were only three. Those three were Ryko, Lightsworn Hunter, Lumina, Lightsworn Summoner, and Lyla, Lightsworn Sorceress. None of those monsters could destroy his Speed Warrior. However, his opponent would be able to hold on for one more turn.

 

A bright beam of light appeared on the field, and a large beast with white and gold armor, sharp gold claws, and a staff with an axe blade at the end of it emerged from it.

 

Alex’s was surprised when he saw the number 2100 appear next to the large beast.

 

“Say hello to my Wulf, Lightsworn Beast (2100/300)!”

 

His opponent had 1200 Life Points, and he had 250 Life Points. Now that Wulf was on the field, and his Speed Warrior had already declared an attack, Alex knew that he was going to lose.

 

“Wulf, Lightsworn Beast, attack his Speed Warrior with Glimmering Claw!”

 

The large beast slashed the silver warrior with its claws, and Alex’s Life Points dropped to 0.

 

“The winner is Rylon Mataki!”

 

The crowd cheered, excited that the duel had finally ended.

 

What a great way to start the year. Failing his biggest test yet.

 

The first episode is more like a preview.

[Kale]

This fan fic has a future.

 

it takes place in duel academy, which is the only part i dont like. but you make it interesting.

 

and your writing skills are very good as well. ^_^

 

keep it up, and you could be where i am now someplace in the future.

 

good job, mate.

 

~K

[StevenBray]

Nice episode, it was a little short but as you said it was more of a preview than anything else. Just one thing if you are going to write a Fan Fic with description, you have to write description throughout the Story; since to be it appeared that you started with description but towards the end the description went away slightly. Just for a case in point (this may be a bit excessive a point), but TO's Third Legacy (and further series) is a great example of description throughout.

 

Plus (TO's can be used for this too) you don't need to put a gap between two sections of speech, because it just looks a little pointless and a poor attempt to try and make a Fan Fic look longer than it is.

[Dad]

Wow, kid failed epicly, lolz. ANyways, a good opening in my opinion. But the D-Academy thing gets old. -.-"

 

~Xemnas

[Wuu.]

nice fan-fic i'm looking forward to your next episode it's very good since i can't rite sh*t i'm kinda looking up to you.