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  1. 1. Is this within my power?

    • Anyone can make this.
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    • We can trust your judgment.
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    • You seem good enough, but there's a lot of room for bias.
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    • We can't trust just one person's judgment.
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    • No one can make this, much less you.
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teramaster Newbie

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TeraMaster| Originality | Frlf

 

I want to see if I got it right this time.

 

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[spoiler=Effect:]During your Main Phase, if your opponent controls a Synchro monster, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. This card cannot be selected as the target of a card effect. During either player's turn, you can remove this face-up card on your side of the field from play to remove 1 Level 8 Synchro monster on the field from play.

 

Image found here: http://undergroundroses.blog.hr/2008/05/1624887049/nostalgija.html -well, this is the link Google provided for this pic's location.

 

Could you please rate the originality of card effect text and the pic? Hope it's not overused and that I'm getting better in creating original effects nn'

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teramaster Newbie

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i just want to know what everyone thinks this was the second card i made so tell me what you think

Normal monsters aren't quite extraordinary here, people comemnt on how well people can construct effects. Btw you should post this in a thread of your own imo. This is also Realistic Cards part of teh forum, so teh type Reaper should be replaced by an existing type, such as Fiend or Zombie. ALso, to make your card stylish, watch out for capital letters and interpunction signs (.:,;-+ and so on)

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TeraMaster| Originality | Frlf

 

I want to see if I got it right this time.

 

41027zz7.jpg

[spoiler=Effect:]During your Main Phase' date=' if your opponent controls a Synchro monster, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. This card cannot be selected as the target of a card effect. During either player's turn, you can remove this face-up card on your side of the field from play to remove 1 Level 8 Synchro monster on the field from play.

 

Image found here: http://undergroundroses.blog.hr/2008/05/1624887049/nostalgija.html -well, this is the link Google provided for this pic's location.

 

Could you please rate the originality of card effect text and the pic? Hope it's not overused and that I'm getting better in creating original effects nn'

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Level 1 Tuner monster, sweet :P

 

Not an overused pic, never seen it b4. You just could add a holo to make it L33ter.

 

The summoning conditions are not kinda original, but never seen it with synchros.

And i guess its fine to remove a tuner to remove a synchro? XD.

 

Well, the overal is that it is original, but it could be better :P.

 

Nice work Student.

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TeraMaster| Originality | Frlf

Level 1 Tuner monster' date=' sweet :P

 

Not an overused pic, never seen it b4. You just could add a holo to make it L33ter.

 

The summoning conditions are not kinda original, but never seen it with synchros.

And i guess its fine to remove a tuner to remove a synchro? XD.

 

Well, the overal is that it is original, but it could be better :P.

 

Nice work Student.

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Thanks! And of course, I'll try harder next time! Could you please give me guidelines on how should I do the next card? Now I know I should make summoning conditions more original. If it can be better than this one, then it's something I don't know that I lack.

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Out of curiosity how would my set score on your grading system.

You can find the set here:

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-68659.html

 

If I recall right Gladiator Beast control decks are still outdoing Teleport Dragon decks in the japanese metagame. Most GB control decks don't even contain tuners in their main deck. They usually side in X-Saber Airbellum and Rescue Cat for their Synchro needs. They should be getting a boost in their tier listing now that Japan is getting Test Tiger and the banning of Arms Hole' date=' Premature Burial, Disk Commander, and DMoC has significantly altered Teleport-Dragon decks. They can't abuse that frozen dragon of the ice realm (forgot it's name) with Arms Hole, Premature Burial, and Disk Commander anymore so there's a lot changes going on in their metagame.

[b']In the Japanese, there's no Allure. Teledadchro is a lot better online than in Japan, although Glads are still doing wonderfully. I find that Jutte Fighter and Marauding Captain are best for Gladchroing, but... How do you run Glads?[/b]

 

Personally, I think YVD would be a better client to use then DMU but that's just me...

It would be, except that we can't judge over YVD.

 

You're accepted as a teacher, BTW. What do you want to teach/take?

i just want to know what everyone thinks this was the second card i made so tell me what you think

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Gyzarus-level. You wanna pay in?

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Well, I guess Japan's metagame will start to align closer to the North American Metagame since today is the release date of their extra pack, which contains the tcg exlcusive gladiator beast cards (the most important one being test tiger) and allure of darkness. It'll be interesting to see what they do with their metagame since they still have a lot duel terminal cards that we have yet to get on top other jump exclusives.

 

Sorry, I don't have a lot of free time to teach/take anything at the moment and I don't think I would be that good of a teacher to begin with. I was just curious on how I would rank on your system.

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Effect Clauses class. Now. Or I shall burn you down with my helicopters of doom. Thank you.

 

*Note: Taken from Koeistu A.K.A. Shadius*

 

BlueKyubbi | Effect Clauses | Supreme Gamesmaster

 

So... We'll be doing good effect clauses mostly for:

•Tuner monsters

•Deck centerpieces (DAD' date=' JD, Gyzarus, etc)

•Fusion monsters

•Synchro monsters

•Support cards

 

Where'd you like to start?

 

Hey could i have my OCG class now?Or is it a bad time?

 

velociraptor3000 | OCG | Supreme Gamesmaster

 

Welcome, guinea pig, to the world of OCG. We'll be covering:

•Punctuation

•Capitalization

•Terminology

•Sentence Structure

 

Where would you like to begin?

 

Well' date=' I guess Japan's metagame will start to align closer to the North American Metagame since today is the release date of their extra pack, which contains the tcg exlcusive gladiator beast cards (the most important one being test tiger) and allure of darkness. It'll be interesting to see what they do with their metagame since they still have a lot duel terminal cards that we have yet to get on top other jump exclusives. [b']It'll probably turn out similar to the net metagame: Zombiechro-control VS Teledadchro VS Gladchro. We'll have to wait and see.[/b]

 

Sorry, I don't have a lot of free time to teach/take anything at the moment. I was just curious on how I would rank on your system.

Doesn't have to be now. You could sign up now and show up later.

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BlueKyubbi | Effect Clauses | Supreme Gamesmaster

 

Um' date=' let's see. I'm alright with Synchro and Fusion...Deck centerpieces don't bother me much, but I still need them, so they're second...Tuners third...so that leaves...Support!

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BlueKyubbi | Effect Clauses | Supreme Gamesmaster

 

Very well. Good support cards help good decks, which are either control-based or 'explosive'. Hence, you will need to come up with a set before you can make really good support. Ideas? Also, meebo account?

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Bond: You're in JD' date=' and are taking Balancing by default. Anything else?

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I'd like to take OCG, because I think that is what kills some of my ratings... Support would be good to take, because I will be starting a set with 493+ Cards (Pokemon). That's all.

 

SecretAgentMan007| Balance| Supreme Gamesmaster

SecretAgentMan007| OCG| Supreme Gamesmaster

SecretAgentMan007| Support| Supreme Gamesmaster

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Frlf Newbie

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TeraMaster| Originality | Frlf

Level 1 Tuner monster' date=' sweet :P

 

Not an overused pic, never seen it b4. You just could add a holo to make it L33ter.

 

The summoning conditions are not kinda original, but never seen it with synchros.

And i guess its fine to remove a tuner to remove a synchro? XD.

 

Well, the overal is that it is original, but it could be better :P.

 

Nice work Student.

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Thanks! And of course, I'll try harder next time! Could you please give me guidelines on how should I do the next card? Now I know I should make summoning conditions more original. If it can be better than this one, then it's something I don't know that I lack.

 

Make a card that would make Out-Dated fusions playable. Thats original :P..

 

Can be written.. :D

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