My mini Rise of The Order Synchro set with a new type of card evolution

[Cocodomoco]

My cards

 

Rate on a scale on 1-10 plz

 

Here you go

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[spoiler=evolution monster]This card can only be evolution summoned by sacrificing one face up Delta 1 king of the order and two or more dark monsters face up on your side the field. This card gains attack equal to the combined level off all the monsters used to summon it X100. You may halve this cards attack to special summon one Ruler token Attribute:Dark Type:Warrior ATK and Def Halve this cards ATK and DEF Effect:You may sacrifice this face up token add this cards attack to one face up Delta 1 Ruler Of the Order's attack.

[JG.]

Its okay but the tuner monster isnt showing up. Is it a mistake or is it my computer. Oh, you get 8/10

[Cocodomoco]

it might just be your comp i will re post it

[♫Griffinsusername♫]

6/10 - Some aren't original and OCG Errors. They should read like this.

 

Delta 1 - King of the Order:

When this card destroys an opponent's monster as a result of battle and sends it to the Graveyard, inflict 500 points of damage to your opponents Life Points.

 

Ruined Warrior:

When this card is destroyed as a result of battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 "Ruined Warrior" from your Hand or Deck.

 

Delta Order 3 - Apocalypse:

"Ruined Warrior" + "1 or more non-Tuner monsters"

This card's ATK and DEF is equal to the number of monsters used to Synchro Summon this card x800.

 

Delta 1 - Ruler of the Order

This card can only be Evolution Summoned(?) by tributing one face up "Delta 1 - King of the Order and two or more face-up dark monsters on your side the field. This card gains ATK equal to the combined level off all the monsters used to Evolution Summon(?) this card x100. You may halve this cards attack to Special Summon one "Ruler Token" (Dark/Warrior/4/ATK 1500/DEF 1500/Effect:You may tribute this face-up token to increase 1 face-up "Delta 1 - Ruler of the Order's" Attack by this cards original ATK.) face-up on your side of the Field.

[Cocodomoco]

6/10 - Some aren't original and OCG Errors. They should read like this.

 

Delta 1 - King of the Order:

When this card destroys an opponent's monster as a result of battle and sends it to the Graveyard' date=' inflict 500 points of damage to your opponents Life Points.

 

[b']Ruined Warrior:[/b]

When this card is destroyed as a result of battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 "Ruined Warrior" from your Hand or Deck.

 

Delta Order 3 - Apocalypse:

"Ruined Warrior" + "1 or more non-Tuner monsters"

This card's ATK and DEF is equal to the number of monsters used to Synchro Summon this card x800.

 

Delta 1 - Ruler of the Order

This card can only be Evolution Summoned(?) by tributing one face up "Delta 1 - King of the Order and two or more face-up dark monsters on your side the field. This card gains ATK equal to the combined level off all the monsters used to Evolution Summon(?) this card x100. You may halve this cards attack to Special Summon one "Ruler Token" (Dark/Warrior/4/ATK 1500/DEF 1500/Effect:You may tribute this face-up token to increase 1 face-up "Delta 1 - Ruler of the Order's" Attack by this cards original ATK.) face-up on your side of the Field.

you got the wrong idea on delta 1 ruler of the order i want it to split in half its attack the turn you use the effect not original attack

 

and for ruined warrior i dont want it to be as a result of battle just destroyed in general

 

and last OCG can also read how i have it if you actually new something about yu gi oh there are different ways the ocg can read so get your facts straight

[TGTwtfDXD]

i think you should fix the OCG a little. 6/10

[TheGiver]

7/10