My first card

[omgakey]

 

Once per turn, flip 3 coins. Depending on the results, apply the following effect:

1 Head - Increase this card's ATK by 500, untill the end of this turn.

2 Heads - Destroy 1 face-up card on the field.

3 Heads - Destroy all face-up monster(s) on your opponent's field.

3 Tails - You lose 1000 Life Points.

these are my first cards if u need me to change anything then ill do it.

 

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i dont own any artwork of my cards

http://www.reanimatedart.com/DarkelfFinal.jpg

[StevenBray]

OCG: "Once per turn, flip 3 coins. Depending on the results, apply the following effect:

1 Head - Increase this card's ATK by 500.

2 Heads - Destroy 1 face-up card on the field.

3 Heads - Destroy all face-up monster(s) on your opponent's field.

3 Tails - You lose 1000 Life Points".

 

Pic is alright, but a bit dark. Effect is balanced sort of, but dangerously leans toward OP.

 

Card Rating: 5/10 - OCG is a mess (your a n00b it's to be expected), and effect is ranging close to OP so be careful.

[OMGAKITTY]

Your name is freakishly similar to mine.... -_________-;;

[Guest Welche]

Bad OCG=Bad card

Bad Pic=Bad card

Bad OCG+Bad Pic=Horrible card

 

On the flip side, you stole OMGAKITTYs name!!!!

[omgakey]

sorry kitty didnt no when i was makeing name sorry and also ninja i bet u this isent the worst pic acually i no its not the worst pic on this thing so dont go and asume stuff without noing what ur saying it might go back on u so ya..... thats all i got for now and i upgraded ocg thanks for the tip once again kitty didnt no u were even on this site X) thanks byebye

[Bloodrun]

Please add a link to the image.

[OMGAKITTY]

Wow.....how about using some punctuation in them sentences?

[omgakey]

ok bloodrun i added link and omgakitty thanks can u tell me exactly what i need to change

[Zack Blaze]

I think it is a good card for a n00b

[Stormex]

Creative card. Some ocg errors but good overall.

6/10

[N00B Hunter]

Your picture is fine. It's a full-body so it looks better than most. The name's not so good; you only capitalized "Demi", how about capitalizing "Dark" and "Elf" too? You have no circulation (good, keep it that way), but your Set ID is a load of garbage letters and you have no copyright. Aesthecity: C+ (work on it. You made some beginner's mistakes)

 

The effect isn't very original, and it's also not very useful. You have a 3/8 chance (27.5%) of destroying 1 monster per set of coin flips. You also have the same chance of increasing your monster's ATK by 500 (which is permanent, in case you didn't know. You need to have a phase limit if you want it to last only for a certain time). You also have a 12.5% chance of destroying all the monsters on the field (a little too high for my taste), and the same chance of losing 1000 LP (a little too low for my taste). The only card playing with chance and destroying monsters that comes to mind is "Zorc Necrophades". He is a Ritual Monster, meaning he's hecka hard to Summon, and his chances are 2/6 for destroying all monsters your opponent controls (he's a Ritual Monster so it balances him), and 1/6 of you losing all your monsters. Notice that his bad effect destroys all your monsters, meaning you can no longer use him. This is what your bad effect should do. It should incapacitate or destroy your monster, preventing it from usings its effect if the result is 0 heads (which is better to write that 3 tails). Also, you need to remember that most high level monsters are hard to summon (heck, all of them are hard to summon) in the metagame, so this would probably be useless anyway. Not only that, but the chances of it actually being useful and only 50%, and while most cards will stay on the field for 1-3 turns, that's not many opportunities to be useful. If this card was a little weaker and had some support combinations, or some kind of backup strategy, it would be a lot better. But since it doesn't, I don't think I can commend it. Balance: B- (Balancing a card also means that the card needs to be useful. No use=no balance. Remember that high-level monsters are harder to use and balance, so it's best to stick with low-levels)

 

Finally, your OCG was quite well done. You missed the period at the end, and you didn't do the correct bullet format (look at "Ancient Gear Gadjiltron Dragon" for the correct bullet format.), but most of what was written was good. Oh, but one of the big things... "Warrior" is spelled with an "a", not an "o" (that one hurt the grade). OCG: B

 

Average Grade: B-

Nice job. Better than most beginners. Keep up the balance, put improve your originality a little, and work on the Set ID and copyright... use references for goodness sake! If you don't know how a Set ID works, look at a real card in the same place. Copy the format. If you don't understand how we use the copyright, look at other cards on the site. If you don't know how to spell "warrior", there's www.dictionary.reference.com! Sometimes it surprises me how you guys think. :mrgreen:

[LiAM]

The image doesnt look manga enough, i looks CGI, possibly xbox or Ps graphics. Go for realistic images and your text seems to be two long, either way with this card your guarenteed a power up and if not, its only 1000 loss, if this was real, it would be banned for sure. But you learn from your mistakes.

 

Card authenticy class: C-/D+

[omgakey]

thanks noobhunter for the info ima try to work on my card some more so thanks and yuhioooh i dont get the rank u gave me its a bunch of letteres to me but noob hunter ill try to work on it more X) thanks keep up commenting and ill try to get this card fixed and get more cards comeing X) thanks again and i hope more coments are here to come X)

[omgakey]

Here is my new elf card come rate and tell me what to change =)

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anyone can come rate plz also im making a nother one yes a third one X) will come out soon so help me with the ones i got till i get it

[yugiohcardmaster5696]

Nice card

creativity 5

ocg 3

origonality 10

18/20

[hellboy565]

nice job this will be my last thing cause i dont like makeing cards but this will be my last thing so nice job and good luck 10/10

[White Devil]

Creative card,

pic could be better,

OCG needs some work,

6/10.

(Pretty Good for a beginner though ^_^)

[Atomix]

Your name is freakishly similar to mine.... -_________-;;

 

Yeah?

[omgakey]

bump