Stormex Posted September 13, 2008 Report Share Posted September 13, 2008 Art:http://www.thehordesofchaos.com/Images/warrior.jpg None of the art is mine please rate and comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted September 13, 2008 Report Share Posted September 13, 2008 Kinda OP. Not Much. Meh OCG. Meh Pic. Good Work Altough :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkey Posted September 13, 2008 Report Share Posted September 13, 2008 op, ocg needs some work, pic is ok.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted September 13, 2008 Report Share Posted September 13, 2008 I think it's quite easy to see how overpowered this card is. Not only can you summon it with just 2 Tributes in a DARK deck, you also have a monster with 4000 DEF (competing against "Hamon" and "Raviel" for the high stats there), 2500 ATK, and an amazing ability of field control. Summon him for 2, destroy all non-DARK Monsters, and then deal 2500+ direct LP damage... great idea for a quick kill, but not a great idea for a card. Here's a good idea if you want to have a balanced card. First of all, make low-level monsters (lvl 6 max). Higher level monsters are harder to balance, and so you don't want to mess with them so much. I do love your aesthecity and OCG, though. I like how you changed the sticker color to gold... nice job with that. The only problem I really have is how thin your guy looks, like he was thrown in the trash compactor from "Star Wars"... that, and the fact that your Set ID is a bunch of random numbers. Create a Set ID for this card. A good thought here is to do ADKS, standing for Armored Dark Knight Single... if you're making a set, then it still works. ("S" could be for "Set" instead of "Single"... tricky, huh?). So this guy would be ADKS-EN001, which is a lot better-looking than 02558-21364 (looks like a social security number). :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stormex Posted September 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 13, 2008 I think it's quite easy to see how overpowered this card is. Not only can you summon it with just 2 Tributes in a DARK deck' date=' you also have a monster with 4000 DEF (competing against "Hamon" and "Raviel" for the high stats there), 2500 ATK, and an amazing ability of field control. Summon him for 2, destroy all non-DARK Monsters, and then deal 2500+ direct LP damage... great idea for a quick kill, but not a great idea for a card. Here's a good idea if you want to have a balanced card. First of all, make low-level monsters (lvl 6 max). Higher level monsters are harder to balance, and so you don't want to mess with them so much. I do love your aesthecity and OCG, though. I like how you changed the sticker color to gold... nice job with that. The only problem I really have is how thin your guy looks, like he was thrown in the trash compactor from "Star Wars"... that, and the fact that your Set ID is a bunch of random numbers. Create a Set ID for this card. A good thought here is to do ADKS, standing for [b']A[/b]rmored Dark Knight Single... if you're making a set, then it still works. ("S" could be for "Set" instead of "Single"... tricky, huh?). So this guy would be ADKS-EN001, which is a lot better-looking than 02558-21364 (looks like a social security number). :mrgreen: Ok thanks for the imput i think i will change the set-id. Also, do you have any suggestions on how to make it more balenced? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted September 13, 2008 Report Share Posted September 13, 2008 Nice card, OCG still needs some work,nice pic,6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted September 13, 2008 Report Share Posted September 13, 2008 It needs work but I won't kill you this time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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