Ouranos, The God King (First Card Post)

[Space Ranger Gold]

No it is not supposed to be a god card, just a really powerful card.

Ouranos is actually the Father of the Titans (Also Known as Father Sky or Uranus) in Greek Mythology, thats why he is called the God King.

PS: I know he might be overpowered, I meant (SP?) to do that. It is made for a Fan Fic I'm working on.

[Valkyrie Lupia Blitzer]

Pic: 6/10 (Err...kind of creepy.)

OCG: 8/10 (Fine...but bad.)

Effect: 0/10 (One Turn Kill!)

Other: 7/10 (Not bad, but 4500 is over the top.)

Overall: 5.25/10 (Joshua says: You need to do better, SRG.)

[jabura86]

uhm.. not bad.. but in my opinion, lower the level and the atk of the monster.. :)

also, instead of 1000 damage, try with 500... or 700.. :)

but these are only my opinions.. :)

[Space Ranger Gold]

Pic: 6/10 (Err...kind of creepy.)

Effect: 0/10 (One Turn Kill!)

 

What do you mean the Picture is creepy and besides the point of him is to be to powerful I explained that!

[Atomix]

Yes, really overpowered.

[OMGAKITTY]

Actually, not too op'd for a 'god' card.....

Still ridiculously op'd.

 

1/10

[Space Ranger Gold]

There now it isn't that Overpowered

[thunderfang12]

still is OP'ed, reduce the damage to something sensible like 200

[fitz0889]

Way too overpowered , way too many stars for a 4500 ATK point card and the pic is okay but a bit creepy.

overall a 7/10, Keep Trying

[Killey]

Did you guys read his post at all? He specifically said that the card was overpowered due to a fan fic that he's working on. It seems to me that this happens a lot on this forum. Someone will explain something about the card, whether it's a mistake or something done intentionally, and then people will grade the card harshly because they aren't reading the entire first post or decide to jump on the band wagon of other people's grades.

 

I won't judge this card because it wouldn't be since you purposefully made this card overpowered. If this card was submitted to be taken seriously then a low mark would be issued. I will say that I like the picture used for this card.

[thunderfang12]

i did read it but im being realistic becuase this is the realistic card thread not the Any Other Card thread which is where this should be

[JG.]

I like the pic and the effect would be good if you lowred the damage to something like 300.

 

To be taken sereiously: 3/10

For fan fic: 7/10

[LiAM]

omg, I hate synchor's but i must say, this card totally rocks, wicked card, but theres not many cards with that many stars :P for realistability=7/10, and originality 5/10, overall grade A-

[Spire]

Most...unnusual, i'll try to help out..

 

-Pic seems good, so good job, nothing else I can say about it.

 

-Ok, I think 12 stars are too high, I think it should be 8 or at least 9 stars, sir.

 

-OCG has a slight error:

 

"everycard"

 

IT'S

 

"every card"

 

Thats all your OCG errors.

 

-Ok, now this is the thing that I don't reall like. You've given it 4500 ATK, which is far too high in my opinion, also don't you think, inflicting " 750 " points of damage is odd? Ussually, it's a hundered, eg: 100, 200, 1000. Well, thats my opinion.

 

-Reduce it's ATK down, lower it's stars, remove the damage to about "200, 300", so it won't be overpowered.

 

-Effect is a little basic, try to make it more origanal and unique.

 

Overall, it's overpowered and that the thing letting this card down, I see a good card maker here, justs needs to balance the card and makes the effect more origanal and complexed.

 

And of corse....

 

Spire's Rating: 7.2/10.

[thunderfang12]

hasn't anyone else noticed this is not a realistic card

[Professor Cobra]

Change 750 to 500, every card. Good pic. Change ATK to 4000, DEF to 3000. 8/10

[thunderfang12]

hasn't anyone else noticed this is not a realistic card and thus should be moved

[Space Ranger Gold]

Sorry forgot about the attack

 

Now it should be fine.