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Power is Destiny [Chapter 2]

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I know I don't make the best Fan-Fic's. And I'm

tired of reading these Yugioh! Fan-Fic's. So enjoy

something new.

 

Each Chapter will be split up into different groups:

Chapter ?

Extra Chapter ?

Extra Chapter ? - A?

 

[spoiler=[b]Chapter 1[/b]]

"This great war is finally coming to an end, Emperor."

 

The noble knight told his mighty Emperor. "Very well.." the Emperor

 

grinned as he got up from his chair. "I shall seize this moment

 

and interrogate Sir Von Hansen, myself." The noble knight stood

 

up and questioned, "Are you sure, Emperor?" he asked.

 

The Emperor turned back and nodded, yes. The noble knight

 

widened his eyes. "Empero--" the noble knight followed, but

 

was stopped by the Emperor's bodyguards. "Sorry. But you'll

 

have to wait outside." The Emperor said as he left his room,

 

the guard also escorted the knight outside, for some training.

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Extra Chapter 1[/b]]

"Jack, what are you planning on doing?" Andrew asked as

 

he layed on his wooden bed, looking at the dirty ceiling. Jack

 

shrugged and asked, "What will you do?" Andrew got up

 

and sat down on his wooden bed. He replied, "I'll travel the lands

 

with my father, hopefully." Andrew answered, he walked

 

over to Jack and set his hands on his shoulders. "You are the

 

greatest you can be, Jack. We are brothers, born by blood

 

and separated by twine." Andrew whispered, Jack started giving

 

up in 'hope'. Andrew lifted Jack's head with his right index finger

 

and continued on. "When we are finally free from this wretched

 

Emperor's ways. I promise you we will finally be great knights.. and

 

earn the Emperor's respect. "I agree with you. Once we get

 

out of this hell-hole we'll be free.." Jack's hopes had returned, yet

 

again set low as he continued, "But what if we die?!" Jack shouted,

 

standing up from his wooden bed. Walking around his cell, he

 

grabbed the cell bars. "I want to get out already," Jack whispered,

 

"And finally be free! Free to live!" Jack exclaimed, taking out his

 

locket given by his mother. "Inside this locket is the key to power, the

 

key to everything. Once I open it my mothers soul will be free..

 

free from the wretched curse the Emperor lay upon her!" Jack banged

 

against the metal door with his left fist. He left a quite dent in the

 

door.

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Extra Chapter 1 - A1[/b]]

Narrator: At midnight, Andrew fell asleep, but yet Jack was left awake.

 

He wondered, sitting on his wooden bed. What would happen if

 

he were to escape? Would he die? Would he be destroyed? Or would

 

he be successful? These were the questions he longed to answer.

 

"Free me.. Free me.." A mysterious voice awoke Jack as he looked around.

 

Andrew was asleep, and no one else was around. Suddenly the

 

voice spoke again, "Free me from this wretched curse.." Jack noticed

 

his locket had a red glow around it, great power was coming from

 

it.

 

"Mother?" Jack asked. "No.. it is I..." the locket continued on as

 

Jack turned on the nearest lamp. "Darkness" Jack widened

 

his eyes, he had heard that name before. He threw his locket at

 

the wall, crushing it open and releasing the evil residing within.

 

"Thank you.. young boy." The spirit said. "Unfortunately, you are

 

the nearest soul. My new vessel!" Jack grabbed the lamp and stood

 

up from his bed. "What do you want? How long have you been in that

 

locket?" Jack asked, swinging the lamp around, hopefully hitting

 

the spirit. "That lamp won't do, Jack. For you see, I am Darkness.

 

The great evil spirit who has created everything that is evil.." Darkness

 

had transported Jack to a deserted wasteland. And his lamp was

 

transformed into a great Holy Sword, entrusted by great power.

 

"Wha? What is this?" Jack asked. "A gift, from me to you.." Darkness

 

replied, "But now... I'll take my gift! Your soul!" Jack was

 

surprised, he swung the sword around but by the minute he ended

 

his madness, his body was engulfed by Darkness.

 

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Chapter 2[/b]]

Jack threw his sack on his bed. "I'm leaving." Jack said, keeping

 

and eye out through the thick metal bars at the top of their

 

cell door. "You're leaving?" Andrew asked, he stood up from his bed,

 

"You're gonna actually try to escape from here?" Andrew looked confused.

 

This was not the Jack he knew, Jack was usually cowardly and

 

afraid. "I'm truly leaving." Jack spoke up, raised his head and continued,

 

"I've had enough of my sad life." Andrew came over to Jack and patted

 

him on the shoulder. "Where are you gonna go?" Andrew asked.

 

"Leave me be.." Jack replied. "I'm leaving and that's final. And, there

 

doesn't seem to be any guards around our cell. But just to be safer,

 

I'll take the vents."

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Extra Chapter 2[/b]]

"All hail Emperor Don!" The crowds bowed down to their current leader.

 

"Perfect! I now have the world in my control!" Don, or Darkness

 

thought. "We're doing pretty well, aren't we Don?" Darkness asked

 

Don within his thoughts. Don couldn't answer, as his body had been engulfed

 

by the evil Darkness also. The crowds continued on.. and the Darkness

 

sensed someone else nearby with the power of Darkness within them.

 

"That presence! It's coming from the East!" Darkness thought, he drew

 

his hand and hung it high. "All knights! Assemble!" Darkness commanded his men.

 

"Block all entrances to this castle! And find the West Border, block it and

 

destroy any human in your path! Women, children and men! Anyone!" Darkness

 

screamed and his men followed the orders. "If that other human with

 

Darkness engulfed within him or her, came here and met me... then my body

 

would be destroyed! While the other being resides with power!"

 

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Extra Chapter 2 - A1[/b]]

Narrator: Children, men and women had been slaughtered

 

by the knights ordered by Don. After each man and woman were slaughtered,

 

the streets were bathed in blood. Don found himself responsible for letting

 

the other Darkness hide within that boys locket. "Jack.. Anther"

 

Darkness thought, residing in Don's mind.

 

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The format is hard to read... But I too don't love those Yu - Gi - Oh! related Fan Fics. I mean they are all over this forum! So this inovation is handy... Re-format it' date=' please.

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You do know what the "Y" in YCM stands for, right?

 

Yes I do, but I'm sure that it is not a problem if someone makes a not-yugioh-related fan-fic?

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' pid='1115579' dateline='1221401946']

The format is hard to read... But I too don't love those Yu - Gi - Oh! related Fan Fics. I mean they are all over this forum! So this inovation is handy... Re-format it' date=' please.

[/quote']

 

You do know what the "Y" in YCM stands for, right?

 

Yes I do, but I'm sure that it is not a problem if someone makes a not-yugioh-related fan-fic?

 

Of course not. You shouldn't just act so... I don't know, surprised of the amount of YGO fanfics here.

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' pid='1115579' dateline='1221401946']

The format is hard to read... But I too don't love those Yu - Gi - Oh! related Fan Fics. I mean they are all over this forum! So this inovation is handy... Re-format it' date=' please.

[/quote']

 

You do know what the "Y" in YCM stands for, right?

 

Yes I do, but I'm sure that it is not a problem if someone makes a not-yugioh-related fan-fic?

 

Of course not. You shouldn't just act so... I don't know, surprised of the amount of YGO fanfics here.

I'm not :) I'm just some kind of... I dont know myself.. But let's not spam the topic here.

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Look: you need to do like this:

 

Joe entered the house dressed in a black coat blah blah...

 

Joe: "Hello, Zack, How are ya doin?"

 

Zack: "I'm just fine, you?"

 

They went out to eat something at burgermakers blah blah...

 

But yet, I can read this. I think it is well. Maybe you should add more descriptions. But the idea is cool.

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