Huntar! Posted September 14, 2008 Report Share Posted September 14, 2008 [font=Trebuchet MS][align=center]Yes, I probobly spelled Telekenisis wrong, if not, BONUS!!! Yay. ehh.. first attempt at making Psychics... I probobly made these overpowered.. yeah.. http://burninglj.deviantart.com Telekenisis Servent 3 [img]http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/9121/43114dq5.jpg[/img] Once per turn, you can treat this card as a Tuner monster until the End Phase. This card gains 300 ATK for each Psychic-Type monster in your Graveyard. If the ATK of this card is over 1500, you can Tribute it to Special Summon 1 "Telekenisis Servent 5" from your hand or Deck. Telekenisis Servent 5 [img]http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/8725/43114nz9.jpg[/img] During your Standby Phase, pay 500 Life Points. If you cannot, this card is destroyed. Once per turn, you can treat this card as a Tuner monster until the End Phase. As long as this card remains face-up, before your opponent's Draw Phase, call Spell Card, Trap Card, or Monster Card. Reveal the card your opponent had drawn. If you called it right, Special Summon 1 Psychic-Type monster from your Graveyard, if you called it wrong, your opponent draws 1 extra card.[/align][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvarosv Posted September 14, 2008 Report Share Posted September 14, 2008 Psychic monster's effects always involve LP. Is servent supposed to be servant? It's Telekinesis. They should be Level monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted September 14, 2008 Report Share Posted September 14, 2008 interesting, like a level monster and a Psychic? XD me likes... however, i think that the wording on the '5' is a tad off... i know what you are trying to say, but i dont think that it is right. 8/10 ~K Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted September 14, 2008 Report Share Posted September 14, 2008 Level monsters have LV before the number. But their good cards. *calls Konami* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted September 14, 2008 Report Share Posted September 14, 2008 Interesting. But Psychics do involve paying Life Points, and gaining them back sometime {AKA Thought Ruler Archfiend}. I give thee. . .8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NineteenHundred Posted September 14, 2008 Report Share Posted September 14, 2008 Good cards, though a few minor errors. - There is a small space in between the word Psychic and the slash before Effect. - Add LV- before the numbers of the monsters. - Servent s/b Servant - Telekinisis s/b Telekenesis - Maybe Servant 3 should be a Lv.1 or Lv.2 monster as it has 0 ATK and 850 DEF. - Perhaps Servant 5 should be a Lv.3 or Lv.4 monster because it has 850 ATK and 1350 DEF. Paying a tribute for a monster with low values (1950 and below) doesn`t seem right to me. Other than those errors, those are pretty cool cards. 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvarosv Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 Telekenesis is wrong. Spelled telekinesis, k ninteenhundred? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 It's Servant by the way.Nice cards though, 9.8/10I like the images. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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