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MY FIRST CARD!!!


fitz0889

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Hm, how do I say this?

I'll put it in a +/- way.

+ The card's DEFINTELY not OP.

- It's a Normal Monster (AKA Vanilla). I'm not huge on the debate, but people really don't like them. It seems bland and uncreative.

- The pic is blurry and overall crap.

- There is no such type as Ninja-Warrior. Just keep it at Warrior, please.

- If you absolutely MUST make a Vanilla, at least have good grammar. End sentences with periods, use commas, etc.

Total Pos: 1

Total Neg: 4

"Elemental Ninja Flames" gets a "take a look at the OCG thread" 2, out of 5.

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i won't take points away on the fact that you made it 5 star for 1900.

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i won't take points away that it's a normal monster at all, because that's just stupid that a card is judged different for not having an effect.

 

your ocg will need work

 

and your pic quality is lacking but not bad

 

also stick to regular types and not "Arch types" as we call them

 

for your first card it's really good keep it up

7/10

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