ganondorf901 Posted September 14, 2008 Report Share Posted September 14, 2008 this is one of my first cards it is very simple and i know it needs an OCG fix, but please be construcutive. (the picture courtesy of www.runescape.com and belongs to jagex, i could not recive anything on original artist) well? please rate and fix. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted September 14, 2008 Report Share Posted September 14, 2008 Hmm, bit basic, has OCG Erros. Fixes:This card cannot be destroyed by a DARK Monster. I think that is the fixes that I need to show. Pic isn't the best, it isn't bad also. You're new, so I'll let it slide. Grade: B+ ~Exodius13 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ganondorf901 Posted September 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2008 thanks!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 14, 2008 Report Share Posted September 14, 2008 Not bad, the picture is alright, but here are a few fixes: decrease the ATK by a couple hundred. OCG: This card cannot be destroyed when battling DARK monsters (damage calculation is applied normally). ^that might not be perfect^ Try adding more to your next effects, this one is too simple. 7/10 Edit: Exodius beat me to OCG fix. but DARK is all capalized. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 14, 2008 Report Share Posted September 14, 2008 I'd go with bengal on the OCCGAnd on the effects.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ganondorf901 Posted September 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2008 thanks again, i have a few might complicated effects but just felt like doing somthing simple Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 I LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 OCG needs fixing but fix is mentioned above (I think Bengel's is better than Enrise). Pic is alright, a bit bland. Effect is simple, but can't be that badly unbalanced. Card Rating: 6.5/10 - OCG needs fixing, and more effect would be better, especially for a high powered monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cardmakerfoo Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 Pretty good, OCG is simple but don't worry, that's what most new members do to their first cards. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the bucket 90 Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 Nice pic but erase the borders at photoshop or gimp Ocg errors And very simple effect6/10 For a new member like you:8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fitz0889 Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 Great pic but effect a bit over the top but it is not bad at all 9/10 Well Done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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