Azoran the Betrayer

[OMGAKITTY]

I really like this pic, I might use it again...

 

This card cannot be Set. If this card is Normal Summoned, switch it to your opponent's control. When this card is Summoned, the player who does not control it gains 100 Life Points for each Spell card in both Graveyards. The player who does not control this card must also switch all of his/her monsters in face up Defense Position (negating any Flip Effects). When this card destroys a monster by battle, the player who does not control this card can draw 1 card from his/her Deck and discard 1 card from his/her hand. When this card is destroyed, the controller can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon it to their opponent's field. If this card is Special Summoned by this effect, it's ATK is halved until the End Phase of the turn it was Summoned.

 

 

Your thoughts matter....just not to me. ;)

Jk.

[Steven Cope]

I like the more strategy then brute force thing it has.

[OMGAKITTY]

Thanks?

[Tabris]

Very, very good. A nice way to manipulate your opponent - a Lava Golem of sorts.

 

9/10

[OMGAKITTY]

Thank you

[StevenBray]

OCG seems ok, within tolerance. There maybe slight errors but I can't see how else to word it. Pic is alright, but a little bland for me really. Effect is balanced, interesting and very different. I like innovation, it's fun.

 

Card Rating: 8.5/10

[cardmakerfoo]

OCG seems fine to me! I like the pic, and never ever saw it before! 9/10 Oh and good effect to, you made it more complicated than most effects are.

[OMGAKITTY]

Thanks everyone

[Bengal]

Nice card, the picture is interesting, the effect is interesting, and the OCG/grammar seems good.

 

nice work.

 

9/10

[Skyson]

"the player who does not control this card" is restated a lot. It's actually possible to replace all of those instances with "your opponent" since while this card is on your opponent's side of the field, "the person who does not control this card" is treated as "the opponent" of that card. It could make the effect look a lot less cluttered.

 

As far as the card itself, it seems like a whole lot of trouble, giving your opponent a big monster that tries to compensate for 2600 ATK with a lot of psuedo-negative effects. Most players would appreciate being given free Tribute bait.

 

Other than that, I could see it being used in its hilarity with Remove Brainwashing, so you can freely Normal Summon a 2600 ATK monster. Or just use the classic Skill Drain. >_>

 

Either way, it looks alright. A lot of downsides for its obvious upside, but I could see it being used in some odd kinds of decks.

 

7/10.

[OMGAKITTY]

Oh man...Tributes. Forgot about that XD

Yeah, I thought about putting 'opponent' but that got confusing for me, even just in my head...does it mean after the card is switched? does it mean MY opponent? my opponent's opponent (so me?) @.@...

But anyways, thanks.

[Steven Cope]

Opponent on a card means opponent of the controller.

EG: my friend used Mushroom Man 2's effect and transfered control of it to me and the word opponent on the card no longer meant me but my friend because he was now the opponent of the card.

[Catman25]

Interesting effects, 9/10

[Chibi Zetsu]

Very good OCG, Effect is kinda similar to Lava Golem in some ways but it also as its own "unique" touch, pic is kinda reminescant of some MTG card pics...card effect however is well balanced and very interesting end effect. 9/10

[BulletMan]

some OCG mistakes, like face up should be face-up

alot of ATK for a lev. 4, even though it goes to your opponent.

7.3/10

[TGTwtfDXD]

i think you are reapeting thingsd too much like "the player who does not control this card" and other things to

[Skarlet]

love it, infact it inspired me to make similar cards (not knock offs in any way) but cards with effects that give your opponent control of the card while you still gain benifits from it being existant.

[OMGAKITTY]

Thanks for all the comments.

[spitfire skateboards]

good card 9/10

[.Digital.Simplicity.]

Awesome card i like the pic 9/10.