Lazer Yoshi Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 [align=center]You bet, I'm back with cards :D All you guy's member cards should be ready later. We gotta make them PERFECT! XDAnyways, IMG Credit for this Card...LOLBuTShoT from DA.Lucky I got this Image before he had to leave since his username was "innapropiate". :lol:Anyways, point out OCG errors, rate, and tell me if I have improved :) Effect: You may Speical Summon this Card from your Deck to your side of Field when a "Rainbow Dragon" on your side of the Field is destroyed. If this Monster is Speical Summoned in this way, deal 2000 damage to your opponent. During the Battle Phase, you may Tribute this face-up card to add 1 "Rainbow Dragon" from your Graveyard or Deck to your Hand. When this effect is activated, neither player can Summon "Rainbow Dragon" for their next 2 Turns.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Hunter™ Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 There are some OCG errors, heres a FixCard:You may Speical Summon this card from your Deck to your side of field when a "Rainbow Dragon" you control is destroyed. If this Monster is Speical Summoned this way, inflict 2000 damage to your opponent. During the Battle Phase, you may Tribute this face-up card to add 1 "Rainbow Dragon" from your Graveyard or Deck to your hand. When this effect is activated, neither player can Summon "Rainbow Dragon" for their next 2 turns."card" is not caps, "field" is not caps, "on your side of the field" is outdated just say "you control", no need for "in", use "inflict instead of "deal", "hand" is not caps, "turns" is not caps. Hope These Help ^ ^ ^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted September 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 Okay, thanks ^_^Did you like the card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Hunter™ Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 The card was not bad, the pic was kinda cool soI'll give you a 8.9/10 (OCG Errors) ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted September 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 Thanks! :DI'm planning to make Teenage Rainbow Dragon as well...Any more ratings? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rlc Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 the spelling needs work... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 COOOOOOOL! i never thought of BUTTON MILK FLY PANTS!! otherwise it is good nice/cute pic and some O.C.G errors here and there but Silent Hunter covered them pretty well!!7.5/10 <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>He/She reminds me of Neos Alius! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fitz0889 Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 Great pic so full marks for that just a few spelling checks and it would be okay so 8/10.P.S: dont make a teenage rainbow dragon becaus it will sort of wreck the greatness of the two cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 I agree! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teramaster Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 Yeah, has OCG errors, but is very playable. Even without its effect it's a 1900 beatstick dragon! But the effect is great, a must-have in every Rainbow Dragon deck =P Can secure the game for you.Playability and originality - 10OCG - 8So 9.33/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Digital.Simplicity. Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 The pic is awesome ocg not bad 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 You can, good pic and effect, change 2000 to 1000. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 card is good, dragon seems a bit black for the clearly light silver Rainbow Dragon but that's not a problem. OCG errors are there but have all been mentioned (rather helpfully) but Silent Hunter. Effect is balanced and good, maybe help with running a Crystal Beast (Rainbow Dragon) Deck. Card Rating: 7/10 - few too many OCG errors to ignore (pic discrepancies does not affect rating) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 A good card, the picture is nice, the effect is fairly balanced, and SilentHunter did a good job on the OCG fix. One thing though, "may" is now "can" 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted September 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 I know it's late, but BUMPThanks for the advice guys :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alastar Rainford Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 Balanced effect but a lil' OP with the DEF unless you seen an effect lv4 card with that much DEF with 1900 ATK.I suggest 1000 or lower DEFRATE: 8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 The pic doesn't really look like a baby dragonIt's a good idea though. ^_^8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 the pic is un-baby rainbow dragonishtheres writing on the pic7.5/10dont cap card, field or monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 Hmm...More like Baby Dark Rainbow Dragon:D8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TGTwtfDXD Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 pic is cool but it looks like it should be baby rainbow dark dragon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted September 19, 2008 Report Share Posted September 19, 2008 The pic has some words on it, and it's a little overpowered, but still very good. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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