New Spell Card(Zombie Reincarnation)

[Silver93]

I'm back this time with a Spell Card :D

This card cannot be activated unless you have 5 Zombie-Type monsters in your Graveyard.This card can only be activated at the start of your Main Phase 1.You cannot Normal Summoned,Set or Special Summon any other monster this turn.Every Standby Phase you can Special Summon a Zombie-Type Monster from your Graveyard.The monster return back to the Graveyard at the End of your Phase or your opponent(if the monster is Special Summoned during your opponent's Standby Phase).That monster cannot be Special Summoned again by this effect until your next End Phase.Pay 300 Life Points every time you use this effect.]

 

Image:http://media.photobucket.com/image/zombie/vnt95/zombie.jpg?o=2

[teramaster]

Uhh... this card limits your monsters on the field to just 1 for one turn. Hmm, even if it's just one turn, zombies won't liek it. They liek to swarm whenever possible.

Has OCG errors here and there, but not bad. Around 7.5/10.

[Silver93]

OCG where? Please tell me.

[teramaster]

This card cannot be activated unless you have 5 Zombie-Type monsters in your Graveyard. This card can only be activated at the start of your Main Phase 1. You cannot Normal Summon, Set or Special Summon any other monster the turn this card is activated. Once per turn, during each Standby Phase, you can pay 300 Life Points to Special Summon a Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard. The monster Special Summoned by this effect is destroyed during each End Phase. That monster cannot be Special Summoned again by this effect until your next End Phase.

 

There, compare. I'd even put "The monster Special Summoned by this effect is destroyed during each End Phase." in plural since it occurs more than once. So the other possibility would be:

 

This card cannot be activated unless you have 5 Zombie-Type monsters in your Graveyard. This card can only be activated at the start of your Main Phase 1. You cannot Normal Summon, Set or Special Summon any other monster the turn this card is activated. Once per turn, during each Standby Phase, you can pay 300 Life Points to Special Summon a Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard. That monster cannot be Special Summoned again by this effect until your next End Phase. Monsters Special Summoned by this effect are destroyed during each End Phase.

 

Hope I helped.

 

P.S: Monster is spelled as "monster", not "Monster". Don't forget that.

[Silver93]

aa..Monster -> monster .i get it,srry,won't happen again

[teramaster]

That's right =P ANd take a closer look to all teh differences between your and my versions, I think it'll help you a lot when you make cards in the future. Tips:

-When using Phases, use the word "During" before them.

-Avoid explanations in brackets, make the effect clear.

-Use space after full-stop (.).

-Monsters cannot be returned to Graveyard according to teh OCG. They can be "sent to Graveyard" or just "destroyed" which implies sending to Graveyard. If u use the word return, use return to the Deck or Hand. If they return to teh field, they are Summoned.

-Costs are usually stated right before the effect, like "Pay 300 Life Points to..."

 

There. Hope I helped.

[Silver93]

Thanks again , +1 Rep from me :D

[teramaster]

You're welcome =P

Uhh, how do you get +1 Rep?

[Silver93]

Right of the Page is "Reputation:2".If you go on the "2" you will se :)

[teramaster]

Oh! Haha thanks a lot!!! I didn't even realize I had any rep points nn'

[Professor Cobra]

Not a, 1, grammar problem, good pic. 6/10

[Steven Cope]

That is a sweet looking pic my friend.

But the name made me think zombie specific Monster Reincarnation before I had even read the effect.

As for the effect itself. Its a very fair card with the whole monster lasts for 1 turn thing. Good for when ur in a tight spot.