David46530 Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 hey this is my second card how did i do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 This card could use some more creativity, the picture needs a background, the effect need something else added to it (or a whole different effect), and here is the improved OCG: "When your opponent activates a Spell or Trap Card, negate the effect and destroy the card. In addition, inflict 500 points of damage to your opppoent's Life Points." 5/10 Edit: it's continuos too? it's overpowered now, don't make it continuos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 ^ What Bengal said. And better pic plz.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zack Blaze Posted October 4, 2008 Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 Pic is too Realistic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted October 4, 2008 Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 You have lots of OCG errors, and the picture's too plain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drakeon Posted October 4, 2008 Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 ocg errors, pic is plain and boring, read a few tutorials on how to make better cards. Don't worry you'll get better though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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