iori587 Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 This is my first card with A Background critism is good So anyways thanks for looking at my card,tell me if i need any work on the effect or the design etc. Also Credit To Shinobi_Kyou On Deviant Art For The Picture,But I Designed The Card (Meaning I Colored it in) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teramaster Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 Hmm, not good... First of all, it's supposed to be "[spellcaster / Spirit]" (keep an eye on spaces and brackets) Then, it's "destroy" and ypu forgot a space before "destroy". And it's "1 face-down Spell or Trap card on the field.". As I can see, you only wrote 1 sentence yourself, and you wrote it with a million OCG errors. Words in effects are not like in names, you don't have to capitalize the 1st letter of every word. When you make a card, make it so that the grammar is as similar as to the original cards.As for this - 3/10. You have a long way to go if you want a 10, but it's not impossible if you listen to other people's advice and make more cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steven Cope Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 U can clearly see the background is added in it looks like 2 seperate pieces rather then 1 whole pic. U need to get the background and pic flowing together. What happened to the OCG at the end? It goes down hill like a demolition ball. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 Yeah, the background itself is pretty nice, but you didn't manage to get it to splice with the picture well at all.Effect/ Spirit thing has already been mentioned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ssgohanf8 Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 i think that the background looks like he's glowing so I can understand if that's what you saw too so pretty good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hobbes96 Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 its ok... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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