My First Card With A Background

[iori587]

This is my first card with A Background critism is good So anyways thanks for looking at my card,tell me if i need any work on the effect or the design etc. Also Credit To Shinobi_Kyou On Deviant Art For The Picture,But I Designed The Card (Meaning I Colored it in)

[teramaster]

Hmm, not good... First of all, it's supposed to be "[spellcaster / Spirit]" (keep an eye on spaces and brackets) Then, it's "destroy" and ypu forgot a space before "destroy". And it's "1 face-down Spell or Trap card on the field.". As I can see, you only wrote 1 sentence yourself, and you wrote it with a million OCG errors. Words in effects are not like in names, you don't have to capitalize the 1st letter of every word. When you make a card, make it so that the grammar is as similar as to the original cards.

As for this - 3/10. You have a long way to go if you want a 10, but it's not impossible if you listen to other people's advice and make more cards.

[Steven Cope]

U can clearly see the background is added in it looks like 2 seperate pieces rather then 1 whole pic. U need to get the background and pic flowing together.

 

What happened to the OCG at the end? It goes down hill like a demolition ball.

[OMGAKITTY]

Yeah, the background itself is pretty nice, but you didn't manage to get it to splice with the picture well at all.

Effect/ Spirit thing has already been mentioned.

[ssgohanf8]

i think that the background looks like he's glowing so I can understand if that's what you saw too so pretty good

[Hobbes96]

its ok...