Dr.Pain Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 [align=center]Paladin of White Magic Here is the newest card i came up with in meh head.I would appredicate feedback on OCG errors, BalenceProblems, and ratings. Art http://images.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://vnmedia.ign.com/screenshots/wow/9315030.jpg&imgrefurl=http://wowvault.ign.com/fullstory.php%3Fid%3D40677&h=317&w=402&sz=25&hl=en&start=186&um=1&usg=__1-4qBQKYimc9FYCkLJ3EY4HPPMo=&tbnid=8cPHZgeeqESYfM:&tbnh=98&tbnw=124&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dpaladin%2Bart%26start%3D180%26ndsp%3D20%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26safe%3Dactive%26sa%3DN ( yes i know its probally over used ) Here it is! If a monster on your field would be destroyed by battle, you can send this card to the Graveyard to prevent the monster from being destroyed. If this card is sent to the graveyard by this effect, special summon this card in face-up attack position on your next Standby Phase.. If a monster on your field would be destroyed by battle, you can send this card to the Graveyard to prevent the monster from being destroyed. If this card is sent to the graveyard by this effect, special summon this card in face-up attack position on your next Standby Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steven Cope Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 during your next Standby Phase. (I think? Not quite sure myself) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
king7586 Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 the effect is weird you send it to the grave and sommon it back on your field i dont get it but its a good idea 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrometheusMFD Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 Graveyard needs to be capitalized, that is it.Try lowering either ATK or DEF a little, like 1900 ATK and 2400 DEF. Just seems a little opAnd for the Special Summon effect, use Sacred Phoenix of Nephthys as a resource Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Pain Posted September 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 the effect is weird you send it to the grave and sommon it back on your field i dont get it You can sacrifice it instead of another monster getting killed.Then he gets reserected on standby phase Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 Don't forget to capitalize Graveyard and others. See OCG thread for full list. Not an overused pic...at least I haven't seen it before.Eh...I don't really like the card...But I'll give it an 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 Since you're preventing the destruction by battle, I believe the wording would be "When 1 of your monsters would be destroyed by battle, you can send this card..." Graveyard is capitalized. The a and p in Attack Position is capitalized. during your Standby Phase, not on. Other than that, this card is just a follow-up to Stardust Dragon. Being a 6* LIGHT/Warrior gives it access to a lot of support, and overall it's not that bad of a card. I like it. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Pain Posted September 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 Fixed Errors and Balence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Pain Posted September 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Does the Text sound alittle better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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