Itamachi Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 This is my very first time using this card creation program and these are my first creations, so please constructive critisim is wanted!! I will post the magic cards as soon as I make them. . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrometheusMFD Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Please do not make your own types. make subtypes instead.A plethora (fun word) of OCG errorsSummonedWATERGraveyardfrom playDeckIncrease this card's ATK by XXXX...TributingFIRE (no attribute, but it is one)Special SummonShadow King should be a DARK attributeonly the first words in each sentence are capitalizedEffects are overpoweredIt is overwelming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Since this is your first post, you would not know that a couple of those pictures are used too much, also a couple of them need background. I also suggest looking at the OCG/grammar thread for some help on the effects. There effects aren't bad though, and here is an OCG fix on your first card: This card can only be Summoned by removing 2 or more Water-Type monsters in your Graveyard from play. When this card is Summoned sucsessfully, you can add 1 "Umi" from your Deck to your hand. Your Deck is then shuffled. In addition, this card gains 300 ATK for every Water-Type monster removed from play. ^might not be entirely correct, but its a start^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steven Cope Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Hers a link to the OCG thread: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Please provide an artist credit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Itamachi Posted September 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Thanks for the comments I will remake the cards and get them back up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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