Zimiri of the Muse Posted December 6, 2008 Report Share Posted December 6, 2008 ok i give it a 7.8/10 your fan fic is really good but u cant sac kuriboh for lava u cant sac a monster on the turn they were sumoned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted December 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2008 Actually, Marvin had played Double Summon, so then he was able to do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zimiri of the Muse Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 sorry read the original rules no monster can be sacraficed on the turn they were summoned double is no exception Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nnoitra Jiruga Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 Wow very nice 8.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 amazing! (though this is the first fanfic i ever read) but you need someone who uses wvxyz cards, those are awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 Crystal Beast 123, you need to actually carefully look at all the card's effects before you use them. Ex. Lava Battleguard pumps up Swamp Battleguard and Swamp pumps up Lava. Also, using Megamorph on GMG won't make its ATK go to two times twice the ATK of the monster you tributed. This is because GMG's ability alters his ATK, not his original ATK, & Megamorph works on original ATK. Plus, I've already commented, so I don't need another point. I just have a few questions:1. Are you making Chapter 4 currently?2. Any idea when you'll post the next few chapters?3. Are you using some fake cards in addition to real cards?4. If yes, do you have these cards made and shown somewhere?5. Although this is a spoiler question: Do you plan on there being love scenes of Mark and Serene? I mean like Serene glomping Mark, or possibly the other way around, or them hugging, or something similar?If you want, you can send me a private message or an email with these answers or just post the answers on this post, but it is a LOT harder to find it on this post. BTW, "Glomp — A hug in the manner of a small child, similar to a bearhug but often including one or both legs as well as arms. Also a hug in which the hugger jumps and catches the victim by surprise or off-guard. Occasionally referred to as a cross between a running tackle and a bearhug." See ya CB123. Source: wikipedia, Glossary of anime and manga,http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Glomp#G Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 people, give crystal a break, did you watch yugioh? they screw the game up worse than crystal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted December 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 1. Are you making Chapter 4 currently?2. Any idea when you'll post the next few chapters?3. Are you using some fake cards in addition to real cards?4. If yes' date=' do you have these cards made and shown somewhere?5. Although this is a spoiler question: Do you plan on there being love scenes of Mark and Serene? [/quote']1. Yes2. Not really. Whenever I have time.3. Yes4. They do not have pics, they are written cards.5. Hmmm. Don't really know yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azerty-of-KoL Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 This is pretty good! I hope the next chapter comes soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted December 20, 2008 Report Share Posted December 20, 2008 hello?is this forgotten? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted December 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 hello?is this forgotten?Thanks for caring about my fic.I'm currently working on the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 hello?is this forgotten?Thanks for caring about my fic.I'm currently working on the next chapter. i hope you care about this fanfic too, i dont think my favorite fan-fic will survive if the writer dosent bump once in a while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted December 22, 2008 Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 Very Good Read all 3 chaps at once 9/10Please Read my fanfic too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Chapter 4 is posted. (AB72, you may post once) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Kinda short, but Chapter 4 is very good. It gets the message across well. Also, nice imagery. Also, check your private message folder. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 *Gasp* NOT BOBBY! it was good, except no battle... but still suspense-filled! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted December 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2008 BOBBY!!!!! *Bump* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted December 26, 2008 Report Share Posted December 26, 2008 all 4 chapters are really good ^_^ 100/100 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted December 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 Thanks ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted December 29, 2008 Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 Hey dude, I posted Chapters up to 21 of My Fan-Fic: Evolution of a Duelist.(NOTE: Whenever I follow this link I get counted as "offline" and I can't post. Sorry if this happens to you.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted December 29, 2008 Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 vHey dude' date=' I posted Chapters up to 21 of My Fan-Fic: Evolution of a Duelist.(NOTE: Whenever I follow this link I get counted as "offline" and I can't post. Sorry if this happens to you.)adververtizing much? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted December 29, 2008 Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 vHey dude' date=' I posted Chapters up to 21 of My Fan-Fic: Evolution of a Duelist.(NOTE: Whenever I follow this link I get counted as "offline" and I can't post. Sorry if this happens to you.)adververtizing much?What? I just wanted to tell Crystal Beast 123 (a fan of my fan-fic) that the newest chapter is out other than by PM, and what better way than a post written by the person I want to get the message to? Seriously I did not mean to advertise with it. The fact that I put my fan-fic's link in my post is irrelevant, based on the fact that the link to my fan-fic is in my signature. Plus, I'm sure there are quite a few people who add "check this out" hyperlinks to their posts to advertise them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted December 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 Please don't argue.Mystery Guest, a PM would have been fine, but you bumped my thread! :DNo more advertising. Next advertisement will be warned, then -repped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted December 29, 2008 Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 I just have a few questions:1. What is "bumping" a thread?2. Is it good?3. Do you have any idea when you'll make Chapter 5 of your fan-fic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted December 29, 2008 Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 eI just have a few questions:1. What is "bumping" a thread?2. Is it good?3. Do you have any idea when you'll make Chapter 5 of your fan-fic? 1. When you post saying "bump" to make the thread go to the top of the forum2. Yes3. 5.just came out.Be patient EDIT: sorry for my spelling, i recently got an ipod touch... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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