Chaotix® Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Loosely based on Dark Magician Girl. I posted this in a contest, so I don't want you to point out mistakes, just leave a rating ;) (contest nearly over anyways) Enjoy th ultimate Buster Blader support! This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 1 Warrior-Type monster you control and 1 Dragon-Type monster your opponent controls. During the turn this card is Special Summoned, you cannot Normal Summon and Set monsters. Each time this card destroys a Dragon-Type Monster your opponent controls, place 1 Blader Counter on this card. If this card is destroyed by battle with a Dragon-Type monster your opponent controls, you can remove 3 Blader Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 "Buster Blader" from your Graveyard. Once per turn, while card is in your Graveyard, all Warrior-Type monsters in your Graveyard are treated as Dragon-Type until the End Phase. This effect can only be used once in a Duel. Image Cred: genzoman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 LOVE the image! I cannot see the effect on my PSP. It looks great! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix® Posted September 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Can't see the effect?! Why not? How can u rate without seeing the effect T_TDid you click the spoiler under it? And if it looks so great, why only 8 out of 10? T_T Joking. Thanks for the rating. When you see the effect, I hope you can get to rating it properly :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Can't view spoilers on a PSP. I just have a good feeling about this card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix® Posted September 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 OK, I removed the spoiler, is that better. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Yep. It is quite a potent, but situational effect. Minor OCG problems. I knew this was gold. My rating is now a 9. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Listy = Bad.. No flow and forced creativity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix® Posted September 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Listy? BTW, it didn't intend for flow, it's a situational buster blader support card. In unison with Bust Blader, you will begin to understand its flow. Thanks for your comment anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Listy? BTW' date=' it didn't intend for flow, it's a situational buster blader support card. In unison with Bust Blader, you will begin to understand its flow. Thanks for your comment anyway.[/quote'] lol then you are trying too hard. This card is unattractive and MOST of the effect is not needed.I would understand had it been rulings issues, (like my early cards). But this is not, try and remake this with less effects in it... And trust me, if I were to rate this it wouldn't be pretty :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix® Posted September 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Ok, thanks for the comment ^_^I took out a bit of the effect, so it is only needed things this time. And why do you say unattractive? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teramaster Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 8.5/10. A bit underpowered, but cool and very original. Minor OCG errors, liek "Warrior-type" instead of "Warrior-type monster". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Hunter™ Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Hmm... Good card but theres some minor OCG Errors. Heres a fixCard:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 1 Warrior-Type you control and 1 Dragon-Type monster your opponent controls with an ATK equal to or lower than half the ATK of the Warrior-Type monster removed from your field. During the turn this card is Special Summoned, you cannot Normal Summon and Set monsters. Each time this card destroys a Dragon-Type Monster your opponent controls, place 1 Blader Counter on this card. If this card is destroyed by battle with a Dragon-Type monster your opponent controls, you can remove 3 Blader Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 "Buster Blader" from your Graveyard. Once per turn, While card is in your Graveyard, all Warrior-Type monsters in your Graveyard are treated as Dragon-Type until the End Phase. This effect can only be used once in a Duel.There is no need for "the" before "then", I don't think you need "any other", and i think its "and" not "or" (cause it stated both of them), maybe it should say "Each time this card destroys a Dragon-Type Monster your opponent controls...", "put" is outdated we now use "place", you should put 1 of these things ("name here") before "Buster Blader", fixed the last sentence for ya. Hope These Help ^ ^ ^Overall: 8.7/10 (OCG Errors) Good Job :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 pretty cool cardlove the picocg looks solid too9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix® Posted September 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Thanks SilentHunter and Ascari ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teramaster Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 And no thanks for me, eh? I'm mad at you... lol joking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix® Posted September 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 I'm so sorry terramaster! I missed your post! :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Great pic and effect. Really nice. I would raise it's ATK though, to 2400 maybe? 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Some minor errors...such as "you cannot Summon and Set..."should be orOnce per turn, while this card is in your Graveyard... Other than that, awesome 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
didaswiwaw Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 nice! some ocg prob (they already tell you) not too op and the effect was good it should be a problem if opponent dont have a dragon monster :p 9/10 :) oh, it can be better if you write your name on the creator Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TGTwtfDXD Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 NIZE! but i think you should raise her ATK a little. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sbamber Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 This card is great!9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 Just as stated, I will post a rating and won't criticize or point out anything about the card. 4/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nekoyuki Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 Lovely card. Simply lovely. I do, however, have a problem with one of the sentences in your effect. "If this card is destroyed by battle with a Dragon-Type monster your opponent controls, you can remove 3 Blader Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 "Buster Blader" from your Graveyard." Could possibly be reworded as follows for the Counters effect. "If this card is destroyed by battle with a Dragon-Type monster when this card has 3 or more Blader Counters on it, you can Special Summon 1 "Buster Blader" from your Graveyard." I only say that because when a card is IN the graveyard, it LOSES its counters, therefore, you can't remove those counters when it's in the graveyard. Also, the "Dragon-Type monster your opponent controls" is going to be a bit redundant, as typically, your opponent is going to be the only one controlling the monster that destroys Buster Blader Girl. Also: "Once per turn, while card is in your Graveyard, all Warrior-Type monsters in your Graveyard are treated as Dragon-Type until the End Phase. This effect can only be used once in a Duel." Could be changed to: "While this card is in your Graveyard, you can remove it from play to have all Warrior-Type monsters in your Graveyard treated as Dragon-Types until the End Phase. This effect can only be used once in the current Duel." It's not necessary, but give SOME kind of drawback to the obvious power boost you'll be giving Buster Blader through this effect. I DO LOVE the concept, and this card COULD stand a slight power boost, perhaps to 2400/1900. This card's effect would go nicely with a well placed DNA Surgery too (after it's summoned of course), to give it the necessary Blader Counters. This card gets a 9.8/10 in my book. Nice work, just fix some minor changes and it'll be perfect for official games. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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