teramaster Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 I have a favor to ask you: Can you rate each card spearately, please? Thanks. [spoiler=Effect:]When this card is Tribute Summoned, remove all Warrior-Type monsters in your Graveyard from play. Increase the ATK of this card for each of your Warrior-Type monsters removed from play x300. You can remove 1 Warrior-Type monster in your Graveyard from play to negate the activation of a Trap card and destroy it. If there are 6 or more of your Warrior-Type monsters removed from play, destroy this card. Image credits to: http://media.photobucket.com/image/knight/Daemonazazael/knight.jpg?o=5and myself for adding some color to it. Thanks to SilentHunter and DeMeNTeD for their comments. The card has been changed accordingly. Hope you like it. I always wanted to make a cool Warrior monarch that has no element. (Kuraz sux, don't you think?) EDIT: Here's another card:[spoiler=Effect:]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 Archfiend monsters you control. The controller of this card pays 1500 Life Points during each of his/her Standby Phases (this is not optional). During your Main Phase, you can destroy all cards on the field. When this card is destroyed, you can add 1 Archfiend monster from your Deck to your hand. You can discard your entire hand to negate the activation of a Spell, Trap or Effect Monster's effect and destroy that card. Skip each of your Draw Phases. Still not perfect, but that's why I posted it, please tell me where did I do wrong.Image credits: Kerrigan by Shiramune (deviantART) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Hunter™ Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 There are some OCG Errors, heres a FixCard:When this card is Tribute Summoned, remove all Warrior-Type monsters in your Graveyard from play. Increase the ATK of this card for each Warrior-Type monster removed from play by this card's effect x300. You can remove 1 Warrior-Type monster in your Graveyard from play to negate the activation of a Trap card and destroy it.In the word "Warrior-Type", "Type" is caps, I fixed the 2nd sentence for ya, Hope These Help ^ ^ ^Effect is kinda simple, the pic is not bad, there are some OCG Errors butnot bad 8.4/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teramaster Posted September 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Thanks a lot Silent! Your comemnt is very appreciated. Will edit the card ASAP! OMG I play the game for so long and I never noticed Type was capped! Btw teh effect's suppsoed be to increase the ATK for just ANY Warrior removed, incl. the opponent's D.D. Assailants =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 It would be overpowered in a warrior deck.Not too bad though.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teramaster Posted September 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 It would be overpowered in a warrior deck.Not too bad though.8/10 Could be. Thanks a lot. Card edited. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spitfire skateboards Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 good card 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KOXPureHeartedXKO Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Alright have to admit pretty good pic...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 It's a nice recolor...And a pretty good effect8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teramaster Posted September 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Hey, thanks a lot everyone :D Your comments are very appreciated. Remind me to give you +1 rep in 1 or 2 days. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Great pic and effect. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teramaster Posted September 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Thanks prof.Cobra! Your comment is really appreciated! Updated the thread, added a new card. Yeah, I know, it's worse than Gladius. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teramaster Posted September 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 Bump number 1, a new card is added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teramaster Posted September 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2008 Bump number 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teramaster Posted September 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 Bump 3. This means, I won't bump anymore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Encalade Shinamisu Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 you should probably edit some of those effects into this 'pay 2500 life points' and 'when this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, special summon one archfiend with less stars than this monster' and scratch the skip draw phase thing... That skip draw phase thing makes no sense... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teramaster Posted September 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Actually it does. You won't be able to use the negation effect that often. But thanks for your comment, I really appreciate it. But when the cost would be 2500, then skipping Draw Phases would be meaningless - that cost is BIG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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