Madsen Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Here it is!: [img]http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/2391/128322hs4.jpg [/img] Image credit: http://blackgrid.deviantart.com/art/Warrior-52797480 Effect: When this card is destroyed by a card effect, you can destroy up to 3 monster cards on your opponents side of the field.Up to the number of cards destroyed this way, activate 1 of the following effects: 1 card:Increase you opponents Life Points by 2000.2 cards:Tribute 2 Level 4 of lower monsters.3 cards:Increase your opponents Life Points by 1000, decrease your own Life Point by 700, and Tribute 1 monster card on your side of the field. I know it's an overused pic, but there are no good knight images-_-" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jabura86 Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 good card, i like the eff.. but in my opinion, because the eff are heavy for you, change in "when this card is destroyed" simplyit's only my opinion.. :)8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 When this card is destroyed by a card effect, you can destroy up to 3 monster cards on your opponents field. Depending on the number of cards destroyed, activate 1 of the following effects:- 1 card: Increase you opponents Life Points by 2000.- 2 cards: Release 2 Level 4 of lower monsters.- 3 cards: Increase your opponent's Life Points by 1000, decrease your own Life Points by 700, and Release 1 monster card on your field. pretty cool cardocg fixes in bold Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted September 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 OK, firstly thanks for the comments!Second, im not a pro to use release, Ascari:DAnyway thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted September 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 me needs comments!And sorry for double posting.NEVER AGAIN PROMISED! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KuroKibo Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Eh, the effects are really great... I don't mind the pic now...I just wonder, whose monster we Tribute/Release on the 2nd effect? Ours, or opponent's? (Tribute 2 Level 4 of lower monsters.)Others are fair great... So far, 8.372/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Hunter™ Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Not bad, but there are some OCG Errors, heres a FixCard:When this card is destroyed by a card effect, you can destroy up to 3 Monster Cards your opponent controls. Based on the number of monsters destroyed this way, activate 1 of the following effects:- 1 card: Increase your opponent's Life Points by 2000.- 2 cards: Tribute 2 Level 4 of lower monsters you control.- 3 cards: Increase your opponent's Life Points by 1000, decrease your own Life Points by 700, and Tribute 1 Monster Card you control."Monster Cards" alone is caps, "opponent's side of the field" is outdated its not "your opponent controls", Fixed the 2nd sentence for ya (Look at other cards), the "1 Card" you didn't finish the word "your", comma in "opponent's" , the "2 cards" you didn't say whos cards to tribute your or your opponent's?, fixed the last number for ya Hope These Help ^ ^ ^About your card:It can be overpowered and underpowered at the same timeBut its somehow balanceThe pic is in the 1st page of "Warrior" in DA so it's kinda overusedNot bad 8.7/10 (^^^) Good Job! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted September 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 It is the first page of warrior on DA?Anyway, i edited the OCG, just i didn't wan't to edit my post:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KuroKibo Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Um, BlackLusterSoldier76, you said on the 2nd effect (by destroying 2 monsters), you must Tribute 2 Level 4 or lower Monsters, right? But, whose monster? Ours, or your opponent's? I'm just confused with that effect only. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted September 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Ours of course.This card would be extremly OPed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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