Newest Card >>Undead Hunter<<

[Delta Guardian]

alright here's my newest card hope you all like...rate and comment please ^_^ One of the 2 cards i've made so far for my Death Garden Pack. Introduces the Undead Counters.

 

 

Image Credit goes to: Edward H

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, put 1 Undead Counter to this card. If this card is targeted by a Spell or Trap remove 2 Undead Counters from this card to destroy the Spell or Trap and remove it from play.

[Silent Hunter™]

Hmm... not a bad card though there are some OCG Errors. Heres a Fix

Card:

This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card cannot be destroyed by Battle. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, place 1 Undead Counter to this card. If this card is targeted by a Spell, Trap, or Monster Effect remove 2 Undead Counters from this card to destroy the Spell, Trap, or Effect Monster and remove it from play.

The word "battle" is not caps, don't forget to put a comma after "turn" and "Standby Phase" and don't misspell it, don't use "put" use "place" cause "put" is outdated.

 

About the card:

The card is a bit OP'd, cause it can negate anything

The pic is kinda... meh

And why is the name of the maker of the card KAZUKI TAKAHASHI???

OVERALL: not bad 7.5/10 Good Job :)

[Chibi Zetsu]

nice card just need to fix the OCG errors stated above, i like the pic but it is kinda OP instead of Spell, Trap and Effect Monsters why not just have it say Spell and Trap so that way Monster Effects can destroy it...but overall pretty good and im guessing u put KAZUKI TAKAHASHI as the creator to make it as real as possible since that is who makes the Yu-Gi-Oh cards anyway. Fix the OCG and i'll give you a 8.5.

 

8/10

[Delta Guardian]

thanks for the OCG help Silent Hunter and thanks for helping making it less OP Chibi Zetsu ^_^ keep the comments coming

[Chibi Zetsu]

your welcome glad to see u made it less OP i'll bump my score up to 8.5/10

[Delta Guardian]

thanks Chibi Zetsu more ppl comment and rate plz!!!

[FireGirl87]

sweet card effect is definatly "machiney" lol pic is pretty cool maybe a little bland but wat isn't these days lol 8/10

[TwinSnakes]

nice card, pretty good effect not OP at all still can be destroyed by effect monsters and spell or trap cards if you DON'T have 2 counters on it.

 

Pic: 8/10

Effect: 9/10

OCG: 9.5/10

 

Overall Rating: A- 9/10

[Steven Cope]

Wow that pic is cool.

Though u still haven't spelt Standby correct, even after Silent Hunter's correction.

[Delta Guardian]

lol oops thought i did well its fixed now thanks for the comments TwinSnakes and Steven Cope glad u liked the pic ^_^...please keep the comments and ratings coming.

[WhiteFang29]

I like it. 8/10 (minor OCG errors)

 

That dude has a USP 40. Im pretty sure (The Gun) :p

[OMGAKITTY]

If it's a machine, it's not really 'undead'...>.>;;

I'd change the name.

[Steven Cope]

unless its a cyborg like robocop a dead human made into a machine.

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Make it lvl 6 or 7.

Meh-ish name.

7.5/10

[Delta Guardian]

Thanks guys for the rates and comments...as for the name I'd like to think you could inturpert it anyway u so desire. But the name is going to stay...look at the card "Giant Trunade" and then the pic the only part that makes sense is the "Giant" part just like on my card the "Hunter" part...but not many ppl know or care that "Trunade" really means "Gust" just like "Undead" really means "Not living" which robots and machines really aren't living...but keep the rates and comments coming plz i still would like 7 more rates and comments b4 i put up my next card is the series.

[Delta Guardian]

more comments and rates please!!!