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My first Synchro monster


BanishedWarrior-V2

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Here it is

 

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Effect:1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters.

You can Tribute this face-up card to inflict 1000 Life Point of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points. During your 3rd Standby Phase, after used this effect, you can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard on your side of the field..[/i]

 

 

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Needs a little bit more creativity, the picture is good, but the card name and effect are kind of boring.

 

The OCG fix on the effect:

 

"You can send this face-up card on your field to the Graveyard to inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. After three turns after this card was sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon it to the field during your Main Phase 1."

 

^not perfect, but it's an improvement^

 

6.5/10

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uhm.. try to change the grammar in:

"You can Tribute this face-up card to inflict 1000 Life Point of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points. During your 3rd Standby Phase, after used this effect, you can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard on your side of the field."

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Needs a little bit more creativity' date=' the picture is good, but the card name and effect are kind of boring.

 

The OCG fix on the effect:

 

"You can send this face-up card on your field to the Graveyard to inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. After three turns after this card was sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon it to the field during your Main Phase 1."

 

^not perfect, but it's an improvement^

 

6.5/10

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OK ill change it later but ill use your improvment for the time being

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