JG. Posted September 19, 2008 Report Share Posted September 19, 2008 Hi, i know you're thinking how the h*** a guy like me with 3 stars can not have made a trap card before. Well it's true 'cause in all my time here (since May 2008) i have only made monsters and maybe 1 or 2 spell and trap cards. But i decided to change that so i am now going to start making spell and traps aswell! I do not know if the card i am going to post is overpowered or not so feel free to rate and comment! As usual constructive critisism is always welcome (but be prepared to get a razor-sharp reply!). [spoiler=Effect]This card can only be activated when your opponent has at least twice as many Life Points as you have. Your opponent takes 700 points of direct damage. Select 2 monsters your opponent controls. The selected monsters can not attack or be used in tribute. On your opponnets 2nd Standby Phase after activation, the 2 monsters are destroyed. Picture Credit: The background is made by me on GIMP but the eye itself is found here.The artist is g3cc0. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted September 19, 2008 Report Share Posted September 19, 2008 way overpowered you need an effect with a down fall to you or the person that uses the card like and the pic is mehish 7/10 great effort though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted September 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2008 You know what i said about the razor sharp reply. You're not going to get it because that really is constructive critisism. It is critisism combined with compliments. Thats how i like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Hunter™ Posted September 19, 2008 Report Share Posted September 19, 2008 There are some OCG Errors, heres a FixCard:This card can only be activated when your opponent has at least twice as many Life Points as you have. Inflict 700 damage to your opponent's Life Points. Select 2 monsters your opponent controls. The selected monsters cannot attack or be used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon. On your opponnets 2nd Standby Phase after activation, the 2 monsters are destroyed.You don't have to say "points" its outdated, "cannot" is 1 word, it should say "or be used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon". About Card:The pic is kinda... but not bad There are a bit OCG Errorsit can be useful (If your opponent's Life Points are twice more than you) it can also be uselessOVERALL: 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted September 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2008 I am sorry to say this silent hunter but your OCG is even worse! I'm not saying i'm the expert on OCG and grammar but i can see that my original OCG is better than your modification. Inflict 700 damage to your opponent's Life Points.: You dont say Life Points any more. You just say "inflict xxx direct damage to..." yes i know i was wrong in the bit about points but i accept it. The selected monsters cannot attack or be used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon.: You do not have to say "... for a Tribute Summon." You can if you want but you dont have to (i think).I do not think there is anymore i need to comment And PLEASE, no one continue this argument. I want my thread to be filled with comments, not arguements. Oh, and thanks for the rate and comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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