Brendano Harns Posted September 19, 2008 Report Share Posted September 19, 2008 Here we go! PLEASE RATE + COMMENT! SITE: http://images.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://www.crazywebsite.com/Free-Galleries-01/Odd-Alien-Pictures/Bizarre-Alien-Images/Amazing-Extraterrestrials-Evil-Easter-Creature_jpg.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.crazywebsite.com/Free-Galleries-01/Odd-Alien-Pictures/pg-Odd-Alien-Gallery/Amazing-Extraterrestrials-Evil-Easter-Creature_jpg.htm&h=332&w=237&sz=16&hl=en&start=2&usg=__Xd0IkjeYk__rUxEUbEBpbKoGimM=&tbnid=c56MDAbtzUA1PM:&tbnh=119&tbnw=85&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dcreature%2Bof%2Bevil%26gbv%3D2%26hl%3DenHolfied: Not: btw, tell me if u think it would b banned, limited, or semi-limited. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted September 19, 2008 Report Share Posted September 19, 2008 the non-holo one i think is better. Overall 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted September 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2008 TNX! I kinda think that 2, but I did it w/ paint, so... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted September 19, 2008 Report Share Posted September 19, 2008 the holo couldv been beter.. but for your first, great job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jabura86 Posted September 19, 2008 Report Share Posted September 19, 2008 good card, i like the eff, is simple, but useful! :)7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XENOCIDEX Posted September 19, 2008 Report Share Posted September 19, 2008 effect is kinda OP but good card nonetheless as the token can be tributed, has decent attack, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted September 19, 2008 Report Share Posted September 19, 2008 the holo doesnt look like a holo, but good attempt :D nice +thumbs up!!+ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted September 19, 2008 Report Share Posted September 19, 2008 Yeeeah, not so good. But for your first holo... and I can't say I've done better. Good card overall but I think 1900 ATK is far too much for a level 1, let alone a token.7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted September 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2008 ohh yeah...right...i made the token LV 1... OOPS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted September 19, 2008 Report Share Posted September 19, 2008 interesting card and very good for your first holo. good job. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted September 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2008 ^^^BUMP^^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 19, 2008 Report Share Posted September 19, 2008 Not bad, the holo could be better, and the effect is a bit simple, here is an OCG fix though: "Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can discard 1 card from your hand to activate 1 of the following effects: -Destroy 1 card on the field. -Summon 1 "Apoclas Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/level 4/ATK: 1900 DEF: 0)." ^how I think it should be^ This effect is overpowered too, lower the "apoclas token's" ATK down to 1000 or so. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted September 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2008 Not bad' date=' the holo could be better, and the effect is a bit simple, here is an OCG fix though: "Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can discard 1 card from your hand to activate 1 of the following effects: -Destroy 1 card on the field. -Summon 1 "Apoclas Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/level 4/ATK: 1900 DEF: 0)." ^how I think it should be^ This effect is overpowered too, lower the "apoclas token's" ATK down to 1000 or so. 6.5/10[/quote']Eh, good point, but I am 2 lazy 2 change it now. good point though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted September 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2008 ^^^BUMP^^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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